Oh, hey there! Didn't expect this one-shot? Ha! Think not. Anyways, I took the challenge from ihearthorses6000 (Ashley) so... if you want to join the challenge than go ahead, be sure to inform her that you're doing it via PM/review. It'd be better if you PM though cuz like, she barely reads the review *rolls eyes* Alas, I wasn't sure what to write so... I just rolled with it as it flows and... decided to make it a poem :D Oh yeah, here's the challenge (totally did not copy&paste this lul):
CONTEST:
I challenge every single one of you guys to write a poem (or a story, or a scene, or WHATEVER, it doesn't matter, just write!) beginning and/or ending with one (or all, for all I care) of the following options, and basically connect it to minecraft in some kind of writing piece:
1)Her eyes were the size of magnificence and color of royalty.
2) His skin was the tint of moonlight and thickness of strength.
3) His breath was the dealer of fire and the whisper of dark magic.
4) Her magic was the power of the moon and strength of its dark side.
To be honest, I feel like the choices she gave me was quite hard... to connect it to Minecraft in a way so... It may be sucky, it may be brilliance, it's a matter of perspective. Hope Ashley's perspective is a good one cuz I wanna win. Because the winner *may* (Ashley, that's just... cruel) pick an OC for her so... ^^ BTW, she does not like Mary Sue. Dunno what's her problem with Mary Sue. Okay, fine, no one likes Mary Sue characters.
Anyways... so... the his and her thing can be switched right? I mean, I forgot to ask so... I may have just failed with this but like, whatever. And I can put some of them in the middle of the poem right? I dunno, like, whatever, again fjadjfdajkfl
PS: Poems doesn't need to rhyme like? Cuz I suck at rhyming so... I dunno, I'm stewpig. Anyways, I might try to put rhymes here and there but some things might be... off. I dunno, let's see. My first time writing a poem so...
PPS: I named this document 'THE CHALLENGE OF PURE EPICNESS' lululul isoljKs!1!
His breath was the dealer of fire and the whisper of dark magic;
It blinds his enemies and puts them in endless tragic.
-o-
Cries of pain is what he likes to hear;
From those weak, annoying humans that always interfere.
-o-
They treat him like a monster, a cruel one that is;
But do they not understand that the fault is not his?
-o-
During his existence, his maliciousness to life had no cure;
Thanks to those filthy gods of Minecraft that claims to be pure.
-o-
Through his life was only loneliness;
As no one wanted to show kindness.
-o-
His happiness was a long lost file;
That he have searched for all the while.
-o-
Sorrow, hate, anger, dread;
Those are the expressions that filled his head.
-o-
He has been misunderstood, looked down upon;
He was the monster the humans didn't fond.
-o-
His skin was the tint of moonlight and thickness of strength;
To stop the suffering, he had gone to great lengths.
-o-
He had enough of being cursed, enough of being hated,
He searched for a new kind of magic, one that is dark and sacred;
For millenniums, this has been kept as secret,
But through his determination, the secret was unfolded.
-o-
This magic had corrupted him, but he stayed oblivious;
Now he continues to torture, for the humans he is furious.
-o-
His eyes were the size of magnificence and color of royalty;
But now corrupted into an endless white that shows no mercy.
-o-
His magic was the power of the moon and strength of its dark side;
For those who dare to threaten him, their faith was for his to decide.
Unfortunately for them, it always turned out horrifyingly bad;
As he is the bringer of chaos, they suffered, they truly had.
-o-
Even though he never knew it, deep down he wanted company;
Not loneliness and hatred, that caused despair, from the many.
-o-
Tales of his malice and evil has been passed from generations to generations;
But not one of them spoke of his feelings, his long isolation.
-o-
It used to hurt him whenever he thinks about it;
But now that he's corrupted, it doesn't affect him one bit.
-o-
He's finally free from those bottled up feelings of hurt that can't be defined;
But why oh why must it end like this, dear Herobrine?
Alright then. That's the best I can do :/ It ain't perfect but at least I tried. I could only manage the beginning but the end... I had to end it with 'Dear Herobrine' cuz like, I like it xD So... I used ALL the challenge things so... I WIN! Jokes, but still, I hope it counts if I put it in between :D Win or lose, either way, I had a great time writing this poem :D It was one of my favorite things to write. Thanks Ashley for the challenge!
Anyways, feel free to critique me on this poem since this way my first :D May have some spelling and grammar errors so go ahead and point them out xD Had to rush it. I kinda feel like writing more poems, ya know? Maybe I should do a poem collection? I dunno. Maybe? Tell me on your review!
BTW, I had those '-o-'s in between the paragraphs thingy (whatever you call it) because it kept deleting the spacing which was annoying so... I dunno what's up with that. Hope it didn't effect too much on the reading!
On another note, I was thinking about publishing a story called 'Fun with Steve and Herobrine'. A good ol' happy chapter filled with frienemie relationships :D I dunno, should I? I was planning on making it cute and a lil' bit fluffy but that just... ain't me. But then, it's a challenge! And should be fun to write ;D Should I? Tell me on your review :P (again)
Got nothing else to say so leave a review if you want and follow/favorite this story if you enjoyed it if you enjoyed it. Be sure to follow me for more Minecraft (possibly more) fandoms! Till then,
PEACE! :3
