( I don't own anything)
The wooden doors slide open to revile a women with long black hair, her face was marred with scratches and dried tears. Her brown eyes scanned the land in front of her, the wind sent a chill up her spine, her mini green skirt was torn on the sides up to the elastic band. Her sailor top was ripped open in the front her red tie gone.
Stumbling to the front porch of her house a couple feet away. Opening the door wasn't very hard but the pain of telling her mother was going to be. "Mom I'm home " yelled the women, "Kagome your home" a women that looked like the younger women named Kagome but older walked around the corner.
"What happened Kagome you're a mess" Kagomes mother said. "Mom there dead all of they we finished the battle and there all dead" kagome said before she past out cold on the floor.
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The sun shined in Kagomes room making her awake with a groan. "Kagome me and your brother are going out will be back later" her mother said walking into her room. "Ok mom night" Kagome said turning around and falling back to sleep.
( alright what do you think should I continue or not what do you people think)