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Stage 1-Why This Thing Started...
Eggman's New Plans
There was a girl in the Robotnik family
(wow, strong intro). She was very independent, especially since
her entire family hated her (much like myself). She had blue eyes,
loved the color blue (as we can already tell something's up),
usually wore blue, had middle-length blue hair, and was developed
early for her age. She looked almost like an Earth human. Her
name was Mercedes.
Everyone in her family wanted her to be
just like them. But no matter what they did to her, she still
didnt want to be like them. The only reason the family didn't
get rid of her is because they really hoped to make her just like
them someday. But a few days some family members would start getting
on her; tell her to get it together.
Mercedes lived with her father, who was
extremely fat, bald, and smart. His name was Julian, known all
over the world as... Robotnik, or Eggman. (How Eggman had a daughter,
I don't know. Maybe he raped some woman and then held her captive
until it was time...) Eggman had recently
given her several abilities, like how to shoot energy blasts from
her hands. But now Eggman found out that that was a dumb idea
to give her an ability that could be dangerous to him if she wasn't
going to follow in his footsteps.
That was the last day he could stand her
and her determination to be a good guy. One night when she was
in bed, he went to her room, kicked her door down and walked in
with a laser blaster. The knockdown of the door woke Mercedes
up, and she was lucky enough to grab the suitcase by the door
and run away in time without getting shot. "That's right.
Run away from me!" he yelled to her. "But don't worry.
I'll get you tomorrow!"
She ran through the woods for about five
minutes to get a safe distance. Then she stopped. She had run
out with basically nothing on, so out of the suitcase she got
a pair of tight jeans and a skintight blue shirt. She then fell
asleep, crying.
The next morning, she saw someone who looked
interesting to her. It was a blue hedgehog with long spiky hair,
dark shiny green eyes, and three more spikes on his back. He had
on red sneakers with a white stripe on them and a gold circle
near the back of them.
"Hey. I'm Mercedes. Who are you?"
she said, coming closer. When she came up to him, she saw he was
about 3/4 her height.
"You don't know me? Sonic,
Sonic the Hedgehog!" he said. "But what's up with your
name? Sounds like something with Eggman..." He then saw she
was trembling.
"Are you okay?" Sonic asked her.
"Oh, umm... nothing important, really..."
"Yes it is for you to be shaking like
that."
"Okay. My father is trying to kill
me. He thinks I give the family a bad name. He doen't like me
cause the family is evil, and I'm not..."
"Yup, thought so! You're Eggman's
daughter!"
"Yeah. You will help me, right?"
"Yeah, of course! I don't leave anyone
alone to be tortured by Eggman."
"Heh! Eggman! I like that!...
Okay, I already know about most of his plans.
So I could go ahead and start..."
Just then Eggman flew down in his Egg-O-Matic.
Two arms extended out of the back and grabbed Mercedes by the
arms; then they drew in and he flew off.
"I told you before. If you mess with
that Sonic ever, I will kill you... But I'll cut you a break,
since you never knew who he was."
Sonic immediately ran off to save her.
He brought Tails along for the ride too. He told him he met someone
who was a strong ally against Eggman.
Mercedes knew that Eggman was trying to
get the Emeralds, so he was obviously headed for Angel Island.
Sitting in the sidecar of Eggman's Egg Apparatus, and tied up,
she tried to think of a way to get out of this.
As you all must know what Angel Island
is, Knuckles was sitting there, asleep, until Eggman came up there
and flew up close to the Emerald Altar. As he got close, the Emeralds
rose and flew off in different directions. Eggman got out and
walked up to the altar.
The guys came too late. Eggman was holding
Knuckles, demanding to know where the Emeralds were. But when
he saw the guys, he dropped him and escaped. Mercedes was still
with him.
They promised to help get his Emeralds
back, so Knuckles decided to stay with them until he got them
back. Oh, and Mercedes didn't like her name, so she came up with
a nickname Sonine.
So I hope you've learned
something... Intros are important. Or else you won't know what
youre doing later. And so what if I have a self-insert? This thing
is old.
