Hi, I am new at this,so sorry for any grammatical errors. I really need to work on my writing so all constructive criticism is greatly appreciated thank you, Josi
Castle walked into the precinct grinning like a fool, in his hands he carried two cups of coffee. However when Castle went to deliver Beckett her coffee, he found her desk empty. Looking around he didn't see Ryan or Esposito anywhere either. Wild thoughts swirled around his head thinking of the worst possible scenarios. He pulled out his cell phone, noticing two missed calls and began to dial.
Two hours earlier,
Beckett fumbled down the dark alley, wishing she'd just stayed at home in her nice warm bed. Instead she was chasing down sociopaths before she'd even had her coffee or her breakfast. Suddenly a scream erupted into the air, the shriek compelled Beckett forward. She ran into the murky alley praying she wasn't to late. "Bang!"
A bullet ricocheted into Becketts torso, she twisted into the brick wall. Not even able to shout as it embedded itself into her stomach. Her last thought was Castle as she sunk into blackness.
Beckett didn't pick up, after three tries, Castle marched into Chief Gates office. That's when the news hit him, Beckett was in the hospital in critical condition along with a young woman by the name of Lilian Ramon. She'd been gunned down by an unknown assailant who had gotten away despite the NYPDs ongoing manhunt. "I thought Detectives Ryan and Esposito called you."Chief Gates said to Castle. He didn't respond as a numbness spread through him." Beckett,hospital,shot,critical condition." Castle rushed out of Gates office and headed to the hospital, praying silently as he put the pedal to the metal.
When Castle got to the hospital he knew he was to late. Lanie walked out with Espositos arms wrapped around her shoulders, sobbing. Esposito was crying too and when they saw Castle they cried even harder. Then tearfully Lanie confirmed what Castle already knew. Beckett was dead.
Thank you for reading, Josi :)