This is my new fic, finally got inspired by Beca and Kommisar. There's no Beca/Jesse and in this fic there won't be and I am native English so I am sorry if my German is rubbish, blame google translator for that. Please read and review, thank you Kim xxx
Oh btw I don't own Beca/Kommisar, they belong to Pitch Perfect only
Coming off stage after we just won the World Championships, I couldn't believe it, all thanks to Chloe and Emily really.
I hear Fat Amy shouting "lets go and get drunk"
We all head off towards the bar as I hear a familiar German voice "congratulations Kleine Maus, you really have surprised me"
"I told you we would kick your gorgeous ass"
"Ja Danke, Kleine Maus"
Chloe looks at me, I whisper "I can't get her out of my mind Chlo"
I look at Kommisar as she smirks at me. Chloe whispers into my ear "she's not the enemy no more so if you like her go for it"
"Kleine Maus I'll talk to you later when you are alone" she smirks and walks off.
I turn round and see all the Bella's looking at me, "what?"
Fat Amy looks at me, "you called her ass gorgeous shawshank"
"I know I did, I can't help it, she makes me sexually confused"
"We all know Beca, she is hot though" I see Cynthia Rose smiling
Runs my hands through my hair, "I need a drink" I go off towards the bar as the girls follow me
A few hours later everyone is dancing and I'm sat at the bar by myself when I hear that sexy voice again. "All alone are you Kleine Maus?"
"By the looks of it so are you"
"Touché Kleine Maus"
"Why do you call me 'little mouse'?"
"Klein Maus, do you know German?"
"Ja, nur ein kleines bisschen und sie meine frage nicht beantwortet haben" - just a little bit and you haven't answered my question
"I am impressed Kleine Maus and because you are small like a mouse Beca"
"How do you know my name?"
"You have a in-depth profile on the Barden Bella website Kleine Maus"
"What is your real name because I know its not Kommisar" I look at her as she leans into my ear
"Mein Name ist Luisa, Kleine Maus" I look up as I see Luisa staring at me with them beautiful blue eyes
"If you would like to spend more time with me Kleine Maus, give me a call" she winks at me as she slides something into my hand, looks down as its her mobile number, smiles to myself. I look up and see Chloe smiling at me and giving the thumbs up. About an hour later we are heading back to the hotel room as I add the number in my phone as Luisa 3 and i just send her a message. "Gute Nacht meine Engel 3 x"
I hear my phone buzz a few minutes later as I see Luisa 3 at the top of the message. "Gute Nacht meine Kleine Maus 3 x"
I smile as I close my eyes and fall asleep dreaming about the German goddess
I wake up the next morning to see a message from Luisa. "Guten Morgen meine Kleine Maus, if you would like to meet for lunch let me know by 11 and I will come and get you x"
I re-read the message before I text back, "Guten Morgen meine Engel, I would love to have lunch with you today, I will be ready for you to come"
"Aww Kleine Maus I knew you couldn't resist my charm, I will collect you at 12 at your hotel"
"How do you know where I am staying meine Engel?"
"What is the saying...hmm...Ja...that is for me to know and for you to find out Kleine Maus" I smile at my phone as I get dressed and go down to breakfast, sees all the Bella's sitting at the table, "Morning ladies"
"Someone is in a good mood today" I hear Chloe say
"Got a date with Luisa"
"Who is Luisa?"
"Oh erm Kommisar" Blushes as all the girls wolf whistle. "Oh shush, she's picking me up and she's taking me for lunch"
"So that is why you look like the cat that got the cream shorty"
I glare at Cynthia Rose, "I'm glad that you are finally going out with her instead of throwing compliments at her every time we see them"
"At least if we see DSM we won't have to listen to shorty's verbal vomit"
"Hey I wasn't that bad" all the girls snigger. "Thanks for the support girls"
After breakfast I head back up to my room to get ready, I hear a knock on my door, "who is it?"
"Bec it is your bestmate let me in" I open the door as Chloe walks in. "I came to help you get ready"
"Thank you, I'm stuck on what to wear"
"Don't worry I'll have you looking gorgeous for Luisa in no time"
Half an hour later I look in the mirror as I'm wearing black skinny jeans, white vest top and a pale blue checked shirt and black boots.
"How do I look Chlo?"
"Gorgeous Bec, wear the black hat, you look great in it"
Feels my phone buzz in my pocket, looks at it as it's Luisa.
"I am outside of your hotel, come to the lobby Kleine Maus x"
Smiles at the message, texts back "I will be down in a minute Meine Engel x"
Looks up at Chloe as she smiles, "Go get your girl Bec" I kiss Chloe's cheek as I head down to the lobby, sees all the girls waiting and smiling, waves as I walk past going over to Luisa.
"You are beautiful Kleine Maus"
"Danke, meine Engel"
"Shall we, Kleine Maus?" She holds her hand out as I take it, the girls wolf whistle as we walk out. "Luisa?"
"Ja Kleine Maus?"
Leans up and kisses her on her lips, "Danke Kleine Maus, maybe we will have another kiss later ja?"
Smiles as we walk down the street holding hands.