Too Close For Me (Before Season 4)

Chapter 1

Kim's POV

As I walked out of Phill's I looked through the dojo window, expecting to see everybody to be goofing off since Rudy was not there watching them; really, even when he was there they still goofed off so I don't know what was going on.

Everybody was working really hard and behaving really well. For Jack that was easy because he always did a fantastic job. Wait, what did I just say? Never mind.

When I walked in the dojo, I asked, "Hey, what's going on? Why are you not doing what you usually do. Which is usually nothing."

"Hey!" Jerry said, a little annoyed, "Laying on the bench, and eating Pizza while sleeping is not nothing."

"Mhhhm," I replied. "So, as I already asked what is going on, I was only gone for like, ten minutes?" I asked a little confused.

"The owner of the mall is talking to Rudy, asking about moving the dojo so he can put in a few more stores." Jack answered, "It's actually-"

"And one of the Stores is going to be SCIENCE MANIA, I am so excited," Milton interrupted

"Sure?" we all said looking at Milton weirdly. "How do you know that exactly?"

"We don't even know how many stores he is planning to put in." Jerry stated, all confused.

"I do my research," Milton said smugly

Then Rudy came out, looking all happy and excited and happy. "Guess what deal I just made with the owner of this mall!"

"What?" we all asked confused.

"I just sold this part of the lot, and since I did that we get put onto another part that is twice this size and our dojo will now two stories! He is coming back tomorrow to sort out all the details and he said he would bring his son," Rudy said, still excited.

We all were really happy about it too because it wasn't far from here and it was going to be bigger. Since we were all so excited I did not even realize that Jack and I were hugging longer than usual. Once we both realized, though, we let go before anybody else noticed. I hope he didn't notice that I started blushing.

That night as I went to bed I thought to myself "I wonder if Jack ever notices me... I wonder if that hug meant something," and then I fell asleep.

Jack's POV

The next day I woke up, got dressed and rode to the dojo on my skateboard. When I walked in, everybody talking to Rudy about when the owner was going to get here. Kim came right over to me. "Don't you think this is exciting, a new dojo and everything?" She asked.

"Yeah" I said, and right before I could finish my sentence the owner and his son walked in.

Kim's POV

Just before Jack could finish his sentence the owner and his son walked in. Right when I saw the owners son I froze. He was about 6'2", had brown hair that came just below his eyebrows and the biggest hazel eyes you would ever see.

"Hello, again Rudy. I do not think I properly introduced myself to you. I am Mr. O' Donald, and this is my son Nick, he is going to be attending the nearby public school, Seaford High." The owner introduced.

After that he walked into Rudy's office with Rudy, I walked over to the lockers with Milton and Jerry.

Jack's POV

After Kim and the others walked to the lockers I started to follow but Nick stopped me. "Hey, I'm Nick. You must be Jack, my father said that Rudy told him all about you."

"Yeah, so, do you do any karate?" I asked.

"No, if I did I would probably break every bone in my body. Just say-an". Nick grinned.

As I was about to walk away Nick stopped me again and asked me something that really caught me off guard. "So, do you know anything about that girl over there?" He asked, pointing to Kim.

"Oh yeah, I definitely do. She's Kim and she is probably the best girl you could ever meet," I said without thinking.

"Awesome, so, whats she like," Nick asked eagerly.

And that made me stop. Every moment with Kim and me popped into my head. All of the moments we spent together at Circus burger, and the skate park. "Well, first off. She is the nicest person you will ever meet. She is also kind, funny, sweet, and-" I then stop abruptly. I realize that I am getting a little carried away.

"Great, I think I'm going to ask her out." Nick said out of the blue.

My heart literally sank. Wait, WHAT, STOP THAT JACK, Kim and I are just friends. That is not what came out though. "What!"

"Wait, you and Kim aren't a thing, are you?" Nick asked.

And when he said that I turned bright red. "No, no, just friends." "Great friends" I whispered to myself again. "She probably won't go out with you though, so don't go getting yo-"

Then he just yells " Hey, Kim would you like to go to Circus Burger tonight at eight? I definitely would like to get to know you a little better."

Sure enough I thought that she would say no right off the bat. She then said something very different. "Sure, that would be nice. I would love that." And with that my heart sank lower than it ever did before.


So this is the story my sister is writing! She's not good with grammar and spelling, (not like I am, not to be tooting my horn) and I edited it. Hope you guys like it!

Another note, please be gentle. This is her first fanfiction. Also, fun fact; she's half my sister and half my best friend. In other words, she is my best friend and the girl I've grown up with. She's also who Amanda is based off of in "Surprise, Surprise," and "The Secret" and also a little bit in "Unnoticed". For that reason, you guys can call her Amanda.

~squirmyorchid and Amanda