My Crappy Ass Doctor Who Fan Fiction

She woke up with a loud gasp.
"woah HAHA first times a charmer" the girl said quite out of breath she then jumped out of the small messy bed that she had been resting on and skipped to the nearest mirror to look at her new appearance "Ginger..." She said with a sigh grabbing at the short orange hair that now flowed from her head "whatever" She then slumped back into a large armchair taking in her surroundings for the first time, she was surrounded be four white walls that had been decorated to look like a fourteen year old's bedroom probably because she looked that age now, in one corner there was a dirty metal door with a window at about head height where a man was now standing. "you awake?" the man said with concern opening the door to let himself in. "who are you?" the girl said "where am I? "I am Capitan Jack Harkness and you are in the headquarters of Torchwood, The Doctor is coming soon he wants to talk to you" "Doctor who?" the girl says as the door opens again with a small creak to reveal a tall skinny man wearing a blue striped suit and a trench coat "Hello" The Doctor almost whispers his voice shaky with nerves and excitement "I'm the doctor can you tell me who you are?" "If you are going to call yourself The Doctor then you can call me Girl I'm not going to tell you my name if you won't tell me yours especially when you have imprisoned me here" "Trust me I never wanted to keep you here but Jack insisted saying it was safe and you could be dangerous" "where was I before I was here" "New York we found you in New York except you look different to what Capitan Jack here has described to me" "of course" the girl moaned getting up from her seat poking The Doctor in the chest forcing him to back up against the wall Jack pointed his gun "Jack, put the gun down" The Doctor warned "Just because I am the last one doesn't mean I am going to help you or give you any information" The Girl snapped at him "But you aren't the last one" The Doctor spoke clearly even though some tears are welling up in his eyes "you and me, together, we are the last of the time lords"