Hey everyone please read THIS IS MY first fanfic constructive criticism R&R

I walked from the initiate dorms. Today we get to choose our jobs. I am going to choose training the transfers with Tobias as one of my job. For my second one I will probably be an ambassador to the other factions or work in the tattoo parlor with Tori.

Hey Tris! Uriah called "what job are you going to pick."

"Ambassador to the other factions and training initiates with Four" I replied "what about you Uri"

I'm going for Dauntless leader in training "he replied

I walked up to the chalkboard where the jobs were listed. Four was annoucing the jobs. "You will each choose a jod depending on your rank so Tris will choose first then Uriah Lynn, Marlene, Peter, Will, Christina, Molly, Al and Drew.

Soon everyone has chosen their job

Me- Ambassador to factions and trainer of transfer initiates

Uriah- dauntless leader in training

Lynn- cook

Marlene- nurse

Christina- tattoo artist and trainer of Dauntless born initiates

Will- control room

Molly, Al and Drew got fence guard

A after we were done choosing our jobs Tobias asked me if I wanted to share his apartment with him. I declined because I wanted to experience living by myself.

So I went to my apartment that I was assigned. As I unlocked the door to find that my neighbor was no other than Tobias.

"I want to show you something" Tobias said. I followed him into his apartment. He led me to a door and he opened it. Inside was a furnished Dauntless apartment with my bag in it "This way you can live alone and I can protect you. "Tobias explained. I stood there surprised. I had gotten exactly what I wanted to close to Tobias and live by myself.

Sorry for short chapter will update after 5 reviews