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Chapter 1: Angel among Hollows

Date: (999,M41)

Segmentum: Segmentum Ultima(It's the real name, look it up)

System: Baal System

World: Baal

In the Baal System is a world named Baal, Baal is a world of rust-red color deserts with two moons named Baal Prime and Baal Secundus, paradise for mortal men once in the past. For Baal itself is for more dangerous to all, for it is a world of mutants and radiation that can kill any normal men. But Baal isn't just a feral world for those who only take a single look at its surface, for it is the home world of the most noble of space marine chapters, for this fortress-monastery belongs to the legendary Chapter of "The Blood Angels."

In the fortress-monastery halls lays space marines training and preparing for the next battle, while serfs maintain the equipment of there masters. But in the main chamber, you can see the gathering of all ten companies of the chapter, sitting on his throne was chapter master Dante with his honor guard at the very end. At the very center was a lone space marine kneeling to the chapter master with his helmet at his side. For he bares the colors and markings of a space marine company captain.

This space marine is named Sariel and is or was the captain of the Blood Angels 3rd Battle Company "Iron helms," Master of Sacrifice. Sariel had cut short black hair and blue eyes, with looks that any women could fall for if it weren't for his duty as a space marine that is. He stood at 8 ft. tall without his armor, he stead 9 ft. tall with it, a head taller than most of his brothers. Sariel was wearing Mark IV Maximus Power Armor in the chapter's colors, red and black. With an Angel's Wing (Jump Pack) and Glaive Encarmine power sword, weapons usually meant for the Sanguinary Guards, but has rightfully earn.

Sariel himself did not act like most typical space marines, not that any of it was heresy more along the line of unusual, but has a very rare trait few space marines had, compassion for his weaker kin. But aside from Sariel compassion, what made him stand among his brothers was his age, Sariel himself is the second oldest Blood Angel to delay his enviable fate of succumbing to the chapters curse, 'The Black Rage' and 'The Red Thirst.' But Sariel wasn't the only one to resist the chapters curse, with those in his company, they too were capable of fighting off there urges while in Sariel's presents.

No one knows why, even the chapters librarians power of the warp and knowledge cannot determine the reason, but some of the chapter say Sariel could be Sanguinius reborn, for he acted very much like there Primarch in there records, but Sariel says otherwise, claiming he could never be Sanguinius for 'I'm but his loyal son, not our great gene-father.' For Sariel still remembers the time when one of their own made similar claims, brother Arkio was mutated by the warp to have angel wings just like there Pirmarch, this him to think he was Sanguinius reborn, but unknown to him was this was no act of the Emperor, for Arkio had become a pawn for the Lord of Change ploy to destroy our chapter. The resulting infighting started the "The Blood Angels Civil War," as they called it, all cause by the claims of a single brother, his acts could have destroy their chapter, Sariel did not want that to happen again.

But his compassion was not the reason he was here surround by his fellow space marines. No, he was here because he was on the edge of falling to the chapters cruse, "The Black Rage," and "The Red Thirst," so he was to be introduced into the Death Company, the same fate all Blood Angels and their Successor Chapters soon meet.

Now the Chapter Master rose from his throne and began to address all.

"My fellow brothers, we have gather here to honor one of our most noble and steadfast brother, Captain Sariel of the 3rd Company, long has he serve the Emperor and the chapter with courage and humanity," said the Chapter Master. When he finish every single space marine there pounded their fists on their chest for their brother.

"But alas, brother Sariel time of commanding the 3rd company has come to an end, for the cruse has taken yet another of our brothers from us, for he is to be place in the Death Company ranks," said Dante, and if any space marines right here had any emotion left, they would feel both anger and sorrow.

"Brother Sariel, step forward," said Dante. As Sariel rose and walked forward only to stop a couple feet away from Dante.

"My honor battle brother, if were not for our chapters curse, you would be first in line for chapter master if it had been my time instead," said Dante.

"My fallings will never deter me from serving the Emperor will, even when I finally succumb to our chapters curse," said Sariel, who spoke with determination and honor.

"Well said my brother, for it goes without saying, you truly do embody Sanguinius sprit," said Dante.

"I am but his son, I could never live up to be our Primarch, for he is at the Emperors side, watching over us," said Sariel. Thou he was being modest and did not believe he was Sanguinius reborn, others were incline to say he was.

"Honor chapter master; hear me for I do have a request before I'm place in the Death Company ranks," said Sariel unmoving.

"Pray tell, what is this request honor brother that you ask for," said Dante curious like the others, wondering what it could be.

"I wish lead my company into battle one last time," said Sariel, whispers began amongst the other space marines as to why he wanted something like that, for no matter what he did, he would still be place in Death Company.

"Curious, tell me brother, why would you ask for this," said Dante wondering himself as well.

"To show that even when I'm no longer leading my brothers as captain, I will still be there their brother even when I no longer can," said Sariel with a hit of regret.

"I see, your reason is sound, I shall grant your request brother, but you must carry the Death Company badge with you, weather you return victorious or find dead is up to you my brother," said Dante with a slight cold gaze.

"I shall do so with honor and pride," said Sariel unflinching.

"Then go brother, bring honor in the Emperors name," as Sariel turn began to walk towards the exit, "For The Emperor," said Dante," "For The Emperor," said all the space marines as there brother was about to leave.

"But remember brother, honor is measure in blood, your enemies or yours," said Dante knowing this would be Sariel last battle.

Date: (999,M41)

Segmentum: Segmentum Ultima

System: Baal System

World: Ammonai

Sariel was given his mission, with his company; they were to face the mortal enemy of their chapter and all successors' chapters of the Blood Angels, "Ka'bandha," demon prince of Khorne (Bloodthrister), Sariel and his company were to hold the demon and his chaos spawn until reinforcements arrive, while the other companies hold off the Tyranids swarm, he knows there will be heavy casualties before they reach them. But that will not stop him from fighting the enemies of the Imperium, even to his dying breath.

"Brothers, we have weather harsher storms then this, show them what the Space Marines can do and push them back, For The Emperor," said Sariel commanding his brothers to fight harder.

The battle had just hours ago and the forces of chaos were already losing large amounts of troops, from cultists to chaos space marines and other chaos spawns. Devastator's were firing their Heavy Bolters along side the Assault Cannons of Dreadnoughts to try and hold back the chaos forces.

"Brothers, with me," said Sariel using his Jump Pack with Squads of Assault Marines to jump right in the middle of enemy, Sariel then landed on top of a cultist and squashed him beneath his feet. With his weapons, Sariel began slaying chaos forces in half with his power sword and blasting them with his plasma pistol. The battle was actually going well all things consider, they were holding the line better than expected in the beginning.

That was until Ka'bandha himself decided to join the battle and things went from hopeful victory to certain defeat. The demon was nearly as tall as Titan knight (I'm not sure about that,ok), wearing ornamented armor color in brass, black, and blood red. He had bat wings used for flight, his armor cover in adorned of the chaos god Khorne and battle trophies of skulls. Carrying in one hand, a long hellblade with jugged edges with chaos ruins on both of its flat sides, and the other a rolled up whip that was on fire.

Ka'bandha first ascends in the air and then lands with a shockwave, causing several space marines be knockdown, he then grabs a space marine and hoisted him into the air and squeeze all the blood of his victim and tossed his dead body like a rag doll. Then cleaved several more space marines to pieces with his hellblade, and then uses his whip to grab another space marine and burn him alive. Sariel had enough of his brothers dying before him and so he came face to face with Ka'bandha in a dual to the death.

"Foul demon, your very present is an insult, by the Emperor, I Sariel of the Blood Angels will end your rain and avenge all those who have fallen to your curse," said Sariel with his hate reaching the surface of his being.

"Ah yes, a son of that weak and pathetic spawn of the Anathema, your soul will make a fine tribute," said the demon with glee.

"YOU DARE INSULT THE PRIMARCH, IN THE NAME OF SANGUINIUS, I WILL SHOW YOU OBLIVION DEMON," said Sariel when his Black Rage was almost out of control.

"Yes, come to me little space marine, come so I can claim your skull for Khorne," said Ka'bandha happily in accepting his challenge.

Sariel came charging in a full speed at Ka'bandha while shooting his plasma pistol and scoring a few hits, then beardly dodging the demons chaos blade when he got to close. Trying to slice the demon to pieces with his power sword only causing a few shallow cuts while the demon laugh at his efforts to harm him. The demon tried to grab him but Sariel was using the demons size against him, moving around him to avoid being killed all the while causing more cuts to appear on the demon using his power sword.

Finally Ka'bandha had enough, he then back handed Sariel, who went nearly 40 ft. away from the demon. Thought it was only a single hit, the power behind it was beyond anything Sariel had taken before, he could barely move without causing too much pain. Then Ka'bandha began to approach the down Sariel as he was trying to recover from the blow.

"It was fun while it lasted space marine, but like all good things, it must come to an end, you and your precious little Primarch," said Ka'bandha slightly disappointed that fight didn't last longer.

Sariel helmet fell off when he was hit, with blood dripping down his face and could see Ka'bandha coming towards him. Sariel knows his death was at hand, he cannot call his brothers for help for they were too busy fighting off the chaos forces. He stared at the demon in much defiance's as he possible could; the Emperor would not find him wanting. Just as he was about to accept his fate, he noticed his power sword started to glow crimson red instead of its usually blue-purple color. At first he though his own swords machine sprit had turn against him, instead, he felt stronger. He could almost feel like Sanguinius was giving him power to finish the one who curse him and his sons. Not feeling the pain as much, he stead up at full height with his renew strength ready for battle once more.

"Oh, it seems you still have some fight left in you space marine, good then, at least try to fight longer this time," said Ka'bandha with excitement in his voice.

Sariel charge again like before but this time was different, when Ka'bandha try to cleave him in half, Sariel brought his sword to meet the demons. What happen cause all to look in awe and shock. When Sariel sword collided with Ka'bandha's, his power sword cut right thru the demons sword in two pieces. The demon recoil back a couple of steps in confusion and slight fear, wondering what happen, in this moment, Sariel pursed his attack. In one clean slice, he cut off the demons left leg with only a single swing of his blade. Making the demon fell to one knee, then again, he cut off the demons right arm while it was still holding the hellblade, and then Sariel stabbed his blade into the demons chest, right were the heart was. Ka'bandha was barely alive at this point; blood pouring out of his wounds, his time was short, for he wasn't coming back again.

"You surprise me….space marine….you have killed me," said Ka'bandha sounding almost like he was enjoying himself.

"I have average all who have fallen before, your soul is no more demon," said Sariel triumph.

"Enjoy it while it last….space marine, for you will take….my place….in the warp," said Ka'bandha while smiling with an evil grin.

The moment he spoke those words a warp portal appear right beside them, drawling in everything nearby. Sariel only hold his ground for a few seconds before he too was drawn in the portal only leaving behind his weapons and helmet, while his brothers watch. With their brother sacrifice, they fought even harder than before to destroy the now leaderless enemy to honor their fallen brother in the coming victory.

Sariel was floating thru the warp, unable to do anything to stop; he could clearly see many different souls and demons of all kinds, waiting for him. They wanted to devour his body to feed their hunger, corrupt his mind with promises of power and wealth, and rip his very soul apart for their own amusement. Sariel did not fear death or their intentions, for he knew no fear, he yelled at the very top of his three lungs, daring them to come and get him. Yet, they did not, for he still floated thru the warp with his sanity intact while being watch by the entities of this mad realm. Then Sariel saw a bright light, blinding him until till everything turn white.

Date: Unknown

Segmentum: Unknown

System: Unknown

World: Unknown

Sariel was no longer blinded and saw he was falling but that only for a few moments and then with a loud thump he landed. He got up and saw he was suddenly in a desert, the sand in the color white, with rocks and boulders in varying size and shrivel up dead trees. When he looks towards the sky, showing it was nighttime, if the black sky and the full moon were anything to go by. This place almost reminded him of Baal if the sand was rust-red color instead of white, he could he was home, but this place wasn't home, not even close, how right he was. (Hueco Mundo)

While trying to figure out where he was and keeping a sharp lookout for anything moving about, he heard a crackle of metal and notices a pair chains on his chest (Chain of Fate). Sariel didn't know how they got there or how long they been there so he tire to remove them. When suddenly, he herd movement behind him and turn around to see three unknown creatures looking at him.

Sariel could feel something was off about these creatures, they felt hollow, a feeling of hunger and emptiness was given off by these beings. They all had masks that were in the color white and bone like texture, with fist size holes that go right through their chests. He did not know what purpose those masks serve and the holes in their chest were most likely flesh wounds.

But that were their seminaries ended, the one in the center was tall, very humanoid in appears, almost stick thin, its mask had two yellow eyes; the top was oval shape dome and bone like teeth (kindda looks like the first hollow in the show Ep1). The one on the right look like an ancient prey mantis from Holy Terra accept its mandibles were replaced with teeth. The last one on the right was also an ancient animal from Holy Terra, a boar if he recalled, it too had bone teeth but with tusks.

"You smell different from other human souls, smell stronger, wear strange clothes, might taste better too," said the Boar like creature while sniffing the air. Sariel was a little shock this beast could talk and it was in Low Gothic, but this wasn't the most bizarre thing he had ever seen.

"Your right Okano, I've never seen a human like this in Hueco Mundo," said the Prey Matins one, with sharping its two blade arms preparing to use them. Sariel was wondering if Hueco Mundo was the name of this land or the planet.

"And he's bigger too, but doesn't look like a soul reaper, no zanpakuto either" said the middle one who's obviously the leader of the three. Sariel had no idea what a zanpakuto was, but soul reaper sounded like a demon of chaos.

"Don't matter Imai, I still going to eat him," said Okano while licking his lips in anticipation.

"Get in line, I saw him first so I get to eat him," said Imai arguing with Okano.

"You saw him first, but that doesn't mean you get to eat him before me," said the Prey Mantis not liking there leader decision.

"What did you say Sakai," said Imai who turn to the one named Sakai.

Sariel didn't have any of his weapons but that didn't mean he was defenseless, if he couldn't fight with his sword then he will fight them the old fashion way; with his fists.

"Do not think I am easy prey when I'm weaponless abominations," said Sariel ready to fight, causing the creatures to stop arguing.

"You Dare Insult Us Puny Human, I Will Cut You Into Pieces," said Yogi anger by Sariel remark.

"Then come and face me beast, for your arrogance will be your end," said Sariel to Yogi while taking a fighting stance.

"You worthless human, I'll show you who will meet there end," said Yogi charging at Sariel who was just waiting there.

When Yogi try to cut him with its blade arm, Sariel move faster and dodge it, when Yogi was preparing to use its other blade arm, Sariel grab a hold of its first blade arm.

"Let go of me human, so I can kill you," said Yogi struggle to break free but to no avail.

'This creature,' though Sariel 'Despite all its talk and size difference, was slow and weak, like boasting orks,' so he pull with all his strength and yank the hollows blade arm right off.

"Aaaaaaah, you bastard, the suffering you will have…." said Yogi before Sariel used its blade to pierce its head, killing it instantly. Yogi disappears in a black like haze along with his blade arm.

"He killed Yogi, what we do now Imai" said Okano now frighten and having second thoughts.

"That's not possible, he's just a human," said Imai with fear crawling up his spine.

"There is no escape, accept the fate of all your kind warp spawn," said Sariel who started running towards Imai.

Sariel jump up in the air, garb onto Imai mask and climb on his back, then he started to bash both his fists into Imai mask repeatedly. While Imai try to throw him off but Sariel grep was too tight, spider cracks appear on his mask the more Sariel fists hit. Finally, Sariel grab Imai mask and crush it with one good squeeze of his hands, killing Imai and turning him into a black haze just like Yogi. Then Sariel saw Okano looking like a counter animal and become desperate to live so he charges at Sariel. Unfortunately for Okano, Sariel saw this coming and when Okano got close enough, Sariel grab a hold of his tusks (like how a bull fighter would grab bull horns) and twisted to try and snap Okano neck. But Sariel didn't notices Okano had bit on the chains of fate and when Sariel snap his neck, the chains went with him. Okano disappear into again, black haze like the other two.

"Chaos spawn will never be a match for the Emperors finest," said Sariel proudly.

Until he saw that the chains were gone and what was left were two holes in his chest just like the creatures he fought. He then realize too little too late what those creatures were, corrupted human soul.

Suddenly, white liquid started coming out (Please be mature about this, because this is what actually happens when someone becomes a hollow) of his month and began covering his face, he try to pull it off in a panic but more kept coming out and started to harden. Sariel could feel himself fading away, like forgetting who he was, why he was fighting for the Emperor, the victory's he win with his brothers, all was slowly slipping away.

When the newly formed mask was done, it look like a chaplain helmet expect with useable teeth and more feral looking, Sariel try to pry it off but it stayed right where it was. Then his body exploded in all directions and then reform into a shape that was humanoid looking (See the picture for a space marine compared to a human and that's how buff he looks). He was clearly 15 ft. tall, angel like wings on his back, and bone like armor covering his upper chest, hands, and lower legs (Like the Imperial Guardmans, but with a few pieces missing).

When the transformation was done, he looks up to the sky and wailed as loud and long as he wanted to. All nearby could hear that a new a new hollow was born, to some that meant more food, to others it meant more competition, and to the rest it didn't matter. When Sariel was done, he realizes he didn't know where he was or why he was here, he couldn't remember much of anything, only his name and his fate.

He then began to crave a symbol on his chest (Winged Skull), then his right shoulder another symbol (Wings with a drop of blood in the middle), and finally one on his left shoulder (Death Company badge), why Shariel does this, he doesn't know, only that he was supposed to wear them. Soon he began to feel hungry when he was done, looking for something to eat, he smelled something and walk towards it. He didn't realize that he walk right out of Hueco Mundo and straight into where no hollow wants be in unless they have a death wise, "The Soul Society."

Hope You Enjoy The First Part Of The Story I'll Put Up New Stuff When I Can.

Just In Case Anyone Who Reads This And Wondering Why Sariel Was Able To Beat The Hollows So Easily, It's Because All Hollows Or at least I Think, Are Just Souls Of Normal Human Beings, Which The Soul Of A Space Marine Is Far More Powerful And Besides If You Think About It Like That, It Autually Makes Sense If You Read The Lore. Another Thing, Sariel Well not Be over Power, Just Because He's A Space Marine, He Can Lose If He's Up against Some Of The More Powerful Characters Of The Bleach Universe Or being Overwhelm With Sheer Numbers.

Also I Can't Decide If A Space Marine Is Suppose To Have Two Hollow Holes Or One, If You Think He Should Tell Me Ok.

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