Authors Notes: Hey! So this is my first story. I'd love any constructive criticism you have. So I hope you like it.
Disclaimer: I will not make any profit off of this, I do not own it either, the great J. K. Rowling does. I do however own my characters Mayzella, Aymee, and Megan.
On with the story!
Lilly, Megan, Aymee, and I are the Marauder girls. It's not that we want to be, that's just how it is.
It all started in my first year. I had said good bye to my parents, and boarded the train. I searched the train for an empty compartment. When I couldn't find one, I settled for one with only one other person inside. As I slide the door open the boy looked up from whatever he was reading.
"May I sit here?" I asked. Then quickly added. "There's no more seats."
"Of course." He quaintly replied.
I quickly slid the door shut behind myself, and sat down. I took this time to really look at him. He had Carmel brown hair, and from what I could tell he had dark chocolate brown eyes. He looked tired, and worn as if he'd just been ill. As I was analyzing him he looked up. I looked away embarrassed. He stuck out his hand, and said.
"My name's Remus Lupin." Remus. What an unusual name. Of course not as unusual as mine.
"Mayzella Elise, pleased to meet you." I said as I shook his hand. It took me a moment to realize that he was now analyzing me. I blushed maddly. I had grey blond hair, with the most unusual gold eyes. Soon he went back to reading. We weren't alone for ever tho.
Soon a girl with fiery red hair knocked on the door.
"May we sit here" She asked.
"Sure." I replied.
She came in and sat down next to me. Two other girls, and a small plump boy falowed her in. The boy sat next to Remus, and the girls sat next to the Red head.
"Hello, my name's Mayzella, but please call me Mazze." The red head smiled at me, and said.
"Hi. I'm Lilly Evans." She said then pointed to one of the girls with black hair.
"This is Aymee, and Megan." She said as pointed to the other girl with brown hair. They both waved.
"And I'm Peter." Said the small boy. I looked over at Remus thinking he would introduce himself, but he didn't.
"Um....this is Remus." I said shyly, blushing. He looked up as I said this, and smiled. I smiled back.
Just then two boys came tumbling into our compartment. One had long curly black hair, the other had shorter messy black hair. Both boys were laughing there heads off. The one with longer hair elbowed the other in the ribs.
"Hey James, looks like we found the chick compartment." He said with a sly look. I frowned.
"Hey can we sit here?" Asked the other boy. No one answered so they just sat down.
"My name is James Potter." Said the one with messy hair. But I noticed that he was only talking to Lilly.
She frowned.
"Who said you could sit here?" She said sharply. It was the one with longer hair that replied.
"Who said we couldn't?" He said cockaly. "By the way, my name is Sirius Black." Lilly huffed, and looked away. I decided to be polite, and said.
" Mayzella." James nodded in acknowledgment.
Just then Aymee spoke for the first time.
"I'm Aymee, this is Megan, and Lilly." hey both nodded. I faintly heard James mutter "Lilly."
"My names Peter. " I looked over and saw Peter looking almost lovingly at James, and Sirius. It was mildly creepy.
"Remus." I heard Remus murmur faintly. Then it was as if we hadn't just met. Lilly was chatting animatedly, to Aymee, and Megan. Remus was reading. James, and Sirius were ploting, as Peter listened avidly.
Ok, I hope you liked it! Pleeeeaaaasssseee review!