So, i thought about re-writting the first chapter because i thought it was kind of lame and badly written if you ask me. Thanks to Owl of Wisdom, Magentarinita and HeatherFeather26!
Chapter 1: Hurt
It has been a few hours since Atlanta got badly injured, crumpled like a piece of paper and ready to be tossed in the wastebasket. The heroes sat in the waiting room, praying that Atlanta is alive, nobody was in the mood to talk.
A nurse suddenly came from the room Atlanta's been in their all day, exhausted she greeted the worried teenagers.
"Is she alive?"
"Is her heart rate normal?"
"Can she speak?"
"Can we see her?"
"Is she unconscious?"
"Is she in a coma?"
The nurse was pretty annoyed, with the teens asking so many questions. "For all I know, she isn't in a very good mood. She'll be out in a few minutes." replied the nurse, who was rather annoyed with the teenagers around.
"Teenagers!" the nurse exclaimed.
Atlanta was fully awake, she heard the nurse mumble something under her breath. "Why hello! I see you're finally awake you're friends are waiting for you." said the nurse, and told her that her friends were anxious to see her.
Atlanta just smiled, and never knew her friends were that concerned for her safety.
The heroes jumped from their seats, more like flyed or soared would be a more suitable word when they caught a sight of Atlanta. "Atlanta!" they all cried, in union.
"Hey guys! What did you ever do to make the nurse so ticked off?" Atlanta chuckled.
"Well.. er curiosity?" replied Herry, lamely.
"Haha... well, she seemed a bit exhausted." laughed, Atlanta.
It was 10:00am, when they reached home. Athena greeted them and made them supper, though they've been out for quite a long time.
"So, did you're battle with Cronus go according to what you expected?" asked Athena.
Jay cleared his throat. "Not exactly what I had in mind.. you can say it was one of our worse defeat.." he replied.
Archie rolled his eyes."You mean.. our first defeat. Did you guys notice how powerful he's gone for the past few days?" Archie correct the leader, hoarsely.
"Yeah, i've noticed. Maybe he had some kind of power boost or something." said Theresa, yawning it was already past ten by then.
"Ya, did you guys notice that Cronus gained more weight? He's so pale, i can even see right through him!" complained Neil, as he slowly sorting his food.
Athena wrinkled her nose. "Whats the matter Neil, you don't like the food?" said Athena, insulted.
"No! It's just, I'm going on a diet. I have special dietary needs, you know!" pouted Neil.
"How come you're eating so slow?" asked Herry, between chews.
Odie rolled his eyes. "Eating more slower, leads to better digestion." he explained.
"Typical Odie, likes to be exact about things." snickered Archie.
Jay could easily predict a arguement was going to break out. So he quickly took command. "You guys, seriously you know what time it is?" he said, changing the subject.
Everyone groaned, and curses were heard under their breaths.
I know, short. boring and badly written.
But, I want to hear you're response!