The New Element Masters
Hello! This is my first story, and I'd like to ask you guys to submit OCs. This story is about the new avatar Korra learning from the new masters of the secret elements. (Lightning, Blood, Energy, Metal) If you're not interested in submitting OCs or want to check out the first chapter first, then you can skip down. If not, I'll explain more.
I need OCs for the masters of Blood, Energy, and Metal (I have my own OC for lightning). I also will need the basic elements for normal characters and/or villains, and non benders if you would like. Here is the form (I'm filling it out for my own character)
Name (surname is optional): Natalia
Age: 16
Gender: female
Bending ability: Lightning (master)
Personality: shy, mysterious, sneaky
Family (if any): she doesn't remember
Pet: tiger cat (domestic cat,size of tiger) named Amber
Any other details: she has amnesia, has flashbacks of her past
Appearance: black hair, orange eyes, average height
Clothing: black traditional chinese vest, black pants, barefoot
Weapons: bending, dagger
If you feel like you want to add anything else, then go ahead.
So that's basically the form. I'll probably need more, but I don't want to make it an eyesore. If I end up picking yours, I'll PM you for more info if needed. So that's it for the OCness. Let's actually start the first chappie!
Chapter One: Getting Sick of the Number Four
It was dinner time at Air Temple Island. The three children of Tenzin and Pema along with their mother were talking, laughing, and stuffing their faces simultaneously. However, the same couldn't be said for the late Avatar's reincarnation and his son. Korra stared at Tenzin across the table. He was, as usual, completely lost in thought, most likely thinking about what he was supposed to do with Korra's airbending predicament. After all, she was still having trouble with it. Korra easily grasped the other three elements, Water, Earth, and Fire, but the South Water tribe girl, to put it simply, epic failed at manipulating the wind element. She was sick of it. Maybe, just maybe, the young Avatar could learn something new to take her mind off of it. She had heard of different forms of the 4 elements. Shouldn't she have to learn those as well? Did Aang learn them? Are they useful? Did anyone specialize in these unique forms of the elements? Soon enough the curiosity had consumed her mind. "Hey, Tenzin, what about the sub-elements?" Korra quickly said. "What?" Tenzin said, half-absorbed in his own thoughts. "Like metal bending and such," the teen answered. The airbending master replied,"That is not needed. My own father only learned how to use Energy bending. You will find no purpose in anything else." "You mean Avatar Aang never learned the others?" "Precisely." "Well, maybe I'll figure out airbending easier if I figure out the others first," Korra said, frustrated.
As Korra stomped out of the room with a "Ughhh", she heard Tenzin mutter, "Maybe," to himself. Korra threw herself onto her bed, as a creak yelled out in response. If Tenzin had actually said what she thought he said, then he might actually be considering getting the masters to teach her the sub-elements. Korra let out a little Squeee from the thought, excited to get away from the boring task of learning airbending for a little bit. She awkwardly rested her head onto the hard pillow, trying to fall asleep. But every time she remembered the idea of being introduced to new powers, the young Avatar was thrown back to consciousness. She started to ponder what the masters would look like. Maybe for Blood, a creepy middle aged strict balding guy, with a weird beard that stuck out forward, and that would give her absolutely no freedom- oh wait, that was Tenzin. She wondered if any of them would be her age. That would be cool.
Natalia frowned inwardly as she summoned the blue lightning to clash again the tree she practiced her technique on. She wanted to pull her lost memories out of the clenched jaws of amnesia, but nothing would reveal itself. If only I could remember where I came from, the lightning master thought in her head. Then it would be all clear. Natalia sat down on the wet grass, getting dew on her silk ebony pants. She just wanted to remember. It pained her to try to wrap her head around what happened to her that would force her memory to be ripped away. All she remembered was that she could lightning bend. She didn't even know her own name until she found it on a slip of paper, stuck in the folds of her clothes. Did Natalia see it coming, and decided to write her name? All of a sudden, her orange eyes glew cyan.
A child, looking to be around 12, walked through a crimson hall, trembling in fear. She was wearing a ragged beige tunic that went down to her knees, and a darker brown pair of shorts, similarly ragged. She frowned as she tried to tear off a piece of the tunic, struggling with her pale tiny hands.
All of a sudden, Natalia was thrust out of her flashback, thoroughly confused. What in the world just happened?
Chapter End
Well, that's the end of the first chapter! Extremely short, I know, but I can't write much without many characters. I promise the next ones will be a LOT longer though.
Review please, whether you want to submit an OC or not. Constructive Criticism is welcome. No flaming please.
