His Time to Shine
This is my very first story so any kind of reviews are necessary thank you… now on to the story
"I can't wait", Zoom thought as he stared at his invitation from freedom fighter HQ. He rolled over on his bed and stared at the ceiling and dreamed. "Zoom, you're going to be late for your orientation", his mother yelled. He suddenly got up with immense speed and put on his socks and shoes, he looked in the mirror and stared at himself and thought. He saw a purple hedgehog with blue bangs, crimson red eyes hoop earring in his left ear, sharp fangs, and a big smile "Presentable". He picked up his letter and packed some clothes and rushed downstairs for breakfast.
He went downstairs to see his mother, a pink hedgehog, his father, a purple hedgehog, and his little sister, another pink hedgehog all at the breakfast table. "Hey family what's" up, his father said. "I'm so excited; I'm going to freedom fighter HQ! I can't wait" Zoom exclaimed. "Well hurry up with your breakfast so you can get out of here" his mother said. After breakfast Zoom and his family said their goodbyes and he left, on his way to his orientation.
He got there just in time to see Princess Sally Acorn. Zoom was all too excited. After that they had to go see Ms. Bunny at the office to find out his sector. "Hi there suga what's your name?" she asked. I'm Zoom, Zoom the Hedgehog, he answered. "Awww shucks that's a nice name", she told him. "Your sector is…"she gasped. "Why suga you're in my sector, you must've had to get a 90 or better in your entrance exams" she said. She looked at his test results. "93 percent wow", she paused. "Ummm how old are you sweetie?"She asked. "16" he answered. "Oh my, you're almost as old as Sonic" she said. "WHAT, SONIC THE HEDGEHOG IS AS OLD AS ME," he screamed "wow". She took his picture and made his ID card and gave it to him. "Here you go suga," she said "by the way, since we will be in the same sector, feel free to ask me anything ok," she told him. "Righteous" he said. "Cool, see you at the dinner table", she said. And with that he walked on his way to dinner. As he got to the dining hall, he saw 8 tables full of food. Various freedom fighters were seen talking to the "newbies". He was walking, starring at everything and everybody. "Oof" was the sound he made as he fell on the floor. "Hey watch where y-," he paused before he could get finish his sentence. He looked up and saw, Shadow the Hedgehog. "Whoa" was all he managed to get out. "Get up don't sit there looking at me", Shadow ordered. "Oh I'm sorry", he said. Don't say sorry, just get up", Shadow ordered again. Zoom got up really quickly and apologized again. "tsk" was the sound Shadow made as he walked away.
Zoom looked at Shadow and turned to see a sky blue female hedgehog inches away from his face. "Damn she sure is attractive", he thought before he snapped out of it. "Hello umm sorry about that, by the way my name is Maya", she told him. "You?" she asked him. "Zoom, nice to meet you", he replied. "So are you hungry Zoom?" she asked him. "Yeah let's find some seats. They walked down the aisles getting to know about each other and they found a couple of seats and sat there. "So, Zoom what sector are you in?" she asked. "Sector Knothole" he told her. "You?" he asked. "Sector Robotropolis", she said. "You know what?" Zoom asked her. "What?" she asked again. "You are a very attractive girl," he said in a seductive tone "how old are you?"He asked. "15" she said blushing. "Hey, can I have your number?" he asked. She wrote it down and gave it to him with a sudden quickness. "Thank you".
As the two ate and talked they heard a voice on the intercom saying it's time to meet the sector leaders. "Oh I have to go, I'm sorry, it was a pleasure meeting you, by", she said and walked away. "Wow" he said to himself. And he left to meet his sector leader. As he walked up to his sector team he saw Tails. "Hey there Tails," he said. "Hello fellow freedom fighter," Tails answered. "What sector are you in?" Tails asked. "I'm in sector Knothole" Zoom exclaimed. "Wow that's my sector; you will be pleased to meet everybody in my sector." Tails said with a hint of excitement. "Well come on Zoom", Tails said pushing him. Zoom followed Tails to a little tree stump. "Hop in", Tails ordered. With that they hopped in.
They came out the other side and there was a door. Tails opened the door and they walked in. "Hey there Zoom sweetie" Bunnie greeted. "Hello Zoom", Sally said. "Hiya there Zoom", Rotor said. "Bonjor", Antoine said. "Hello", Zoom greeted back. "Ummm Sonics not here at the moment because he is out getting information on Dr. Robotnik", Tails said. "He will be here by tomorrow though, so, rest up, you got to get up early in the morning. Sally showed Zoom to his room and he put down his things. He hopped on his new bed "This feels epic", thought to himself. And with that last thought he fell fast asleep