Greetings! Taiga here! Almost to beta status w00t! haha so yeah once I get to beta status (Which hopefully this poem will bring me to it) if you would like to request my services please do so! I'm home doing nothing almost all day everday so I need something to do in my spare time. Anyways! This is just a really sweet and short Haku and Chihiro poem that I wrote. I really like it, but that is me so give me your opinion on it please!
Haku and Chihiro,
Spirit and Human,
Boy and girl,
Pure and innocent love that blossomed like a flower,
Love that couldn't be understood by children.
Pure and innocent,
Enviable.
That river where it bloomed now gone,
The beautiful thing that was planted there leaving no proof.
Reunited they were many years later,
The love was rediscovered and bloomed beautifully,
Still not able to be understood by them as were affected by it.
The beauty of it incomparable.
They made their sacrifices,
They saved each other,
He made a promise.
She left.
The promise is still waiting to be fulfilled,
Until then though,
Their love remains.
It stretches across the gap of space between their worlds.
So that they are always with each other.
Even if they do not understand now.
When the promise is fulfilled,
They will.
Forever.
Well? Did you like it? This is my first ever poem so please, please, please let me know how I did on it! I think it was good for being my first ever poem. If you liked it please inform me and I will continue writing little poems. If you didn't like it still tell me so and let me know why so that I can improve! Thanks so much!