Hello everyone who decided to take a look at my story and greatly appreciate it and hop you all enjoy it. this first chapter is just to see if anyone is interested in my story and if so i will upload the first chapter since i already have it tipped and edited.
I'm not going to lie i'm a little nervous since this is my first story but i would appreciate any constructive criticism you will have to help my writhing improve and i apologize for any grammar mistakes i mite have made grammar has never bin my strong suit. i dont own lord of the rings despite wishing i did
Now that that is out of the way lets get to the story so with out further ado here it is i hop you enjoy
The Legend of the Spartans
Long ago in the early years of middle-earth, before the times of elves and dwarves the first creatures emerged. These creatures were a peaceful people, they enjoyed building, exploring and most of all they loved to create things, they built a great city inside of a lonely mountain they named it Sparta. These people lived in harmony for hundreds of years until one-day war came from a far off people, these people were know as orcs they came and slaughtered the Spartans for no other reason than they could. The Spartans had no soldiers to defend themselves with, for they never had a need for them the orcs were relentless they killed all but one, one spartan still lived burning with hate and a thirst for revenge he prayed that night to the maker for a way to get back at the orcs and the maker answered.
All around him thousands of his people started to breath and get up fully healed, sadly not all got up there was just enough to save the Spartans from extinction. the Spartans quickly came up with a plan to beat the orc menace they would take all of the spartan boys at the age of six and train them in the use of a sword and spear, and the art of war, they'd be taught to fight as a unit with their massive shields in front of them and overlapping each other. Unknown to the orcs they had created their worst nightmare, they had created men who would follow them to the ends of middle earth to kill them, they had created the Spartans with one purposeā¦...WAR!
