Private's Cruse

Chapter 1

By. PenguinPro

I DO NOT OWN PoM VIACOM DOES

It was an ordinary Sunday night in the penguin HQ; which meant two things for the penguins. One, no humans and two, movie night!

"Alright men status report!" Skipper, the leader of the penguins was making sure everything was alright for movie night. "How's the popcorn?"

"All popped Skippah!" Private, the youngest of the penguins was on popcorn duty.

"It's not burnt this time is it?" asked Skipper, "That smell was in here for three days!"

"Not this time!" answered Private, "And its extra butter!"

"That's fine but go with normal butter next time I don't need you boys going soft on me." Said Skipper, "Kowalski how's the surround sound going?

"It's almost finished I just have to tighten this last bolt!" Kowalski, the strategist of the group was doing what we normal does trying to make things better, "DONE!" Kowalski gets electrocuted although most of the he ends up getting himself, or the entire zoo, into trouble. "I'm ok…just a little singed"

"Put some ice on it…" advised Skipper, "Ok Rico what movie did you choose?"

"BLARHGHAR!" Rico, the insane, explosive, but sweet, member of the group was excited it was finally his week to choose the movie, Rico holds up the classic horror film the Wolfman.

"I don't young Private is old enough for this movie yet Rico…" warned Skipper worried of the possible nightly disturbances.

"I'll be fine I'll cover my eyes during the scary parts." Reassured Private.

"Fine, but the moment it gets to scary for you leave the room." Skipper said with a stern look meaning he meant business.

"Alright…" Private said sadly.

"Let's start the movie!" Skipper said.

A couple hours later after the movie ended.

"Well man that's a movie that gets better every time you watch it!" Skipper said.

"I'm going in my lab" Kowalski yawned.

"Remember to get sleep this time..." reminded Skipper.

"Alright" agreed Kowalski.

"How did you like it Rico?...Rico?" inquired Skipper. Skipper looks over to Rico and sees he is sleeping on the couch.

"So how about you Private..Private? You're not asleep to are you?" Skipper looks over to private and sees he's cowering under a blanket.

"I-i-is it o-o-over?" Private asked frightened.

Skipper sighs "Private…go take a walk before going to sleep I don't want you screaming in the middle of the night like last time we watched a scary movie." Skipper ordered with a soft tone.

"Alright I'll be back soon!" cried out Private as he left.

Private has just reached the zoouvenir shop. "Argghh why do I always get so freaked out by these scary movies…" Private said angrily as kicking a pebble. "Skippah is right I need to toughen up…" Private sighs. Suddenly a bush next to him starts to rustle. "Who's there?" Private asked surprised. Bush rustles more "I'm warning you I know how to fight! Under his breath …kinda…"

Puppy jumps out of the bush; it's a brown and black Labrador with red eyes "Awww you're so adorable! Private reaches out to pet him when it starts to growl showing its rows of sharp yellow teeth, some of which are cracked. "N-n-n-nice p-p-p-puppy." Private said frightened while slowly backing away.

The puppy jumps out and bites Private on the flipper. Private tries to scream but doesn't hear anything come out. Private falls to the ground and the last thing he remembers is the puppy running away.

The next day 0700 hours

"Arghhh my head…it feels like that time I ate my snow cone too fast…only a lot worse.." Private sad cringing in pain. "Where am I anyways?" Private said curiously. Private looks around and sees that he is in the Zoo's food storage. "That's odd how did I get here…wait a minute where's all the meat?" Upon closer inspection Private noticed all the fish and steaks for the next month is gone. "That's strange…" The door handle for the food storage starts jiggling. "I gotta get out of here!" Private franticly searches the room from a way out, and then he spots a broken window. "That will work!" Private jumps out the window and runs back to his habitat. When Private makes it he jumps over the railing and into the water. Private gets out and is greeted by…"PRIVATE!" Skipper said angrily. The anger in his voice almost made private fall back into the water. "Waa!" Skipper grabs Private's flippers to make sure he doesn't fall. Skipper sighs "Private where were you last night, I was about to announce you AWAL!" Skipper said annoyed "Skipper something...unexpected…happen." Private said. " It doesn't matter you missed morning training as punishment you get night watch today." Private gulps "Even after what happen last time?" Skipper puts his flipper under his chin "Good point…" Private smiles thinking he got off the hook. "No sugar then." Private jaw dropped "But how am I suppose to stay up all night without sugar…" Private said confused. "Well I don't know, just work out while up there our something." "Ok…I'll try that" Private said disappointed. "Ok now then let's go inside still got an hour before the humans arrive."

That Night, on top of the zoo entrance 2300 hours

"Nothing suspicious going on…." Private puts down his binoculars "I still don't understand how I woke up in the food storage…" Private shakes his head. "I'm over thinking this I probably fell asleep in there and just don't remember because of how tired I was." Private giggles. "But there was this weird dog…I remember it biting me…then it goes blank." Suddenly the bell signalizing its midnight starts ringing. "Well its midnight time to head back." Private bends down to pick up his binoculars when he suddenly gets a pain in his stomach. "Argghhh!" Private walks over to the bell to support himself, then he glances at his reflection. "M-my eyes their red!" Private gasped in horror as he watched his reflection transform. His feathers became jet black fur, his flippers turned into paws and his beak became a muzzle, teeth grew into his new mouth, his legs became longer along with his tail. "What's happening to me?" Private screamed at his new body. Private falls to the ground unannounced to Private along with that new body a new mind came with it. "I'm hungry…" Private licks his lips as he looks around for some food. His eyes see the lemur exhibit; they are still up and dancing. "Hmm, wonder if those taste better then the steaks and fish I had last night, Private licks his lips again, only one way to find out." Private leaps off the entrance and lands perfectly on the ground he then bolts to the lemur exhibit.

"MAURICE! Pick up the feets! Bend the floppy things you call your knees! That sloppiness you call dancing isn't good at all!" Julien, as usual, was yelling at his royal subjects.

"My feet are killing me. I gotta take a break…" Maurice, the king's royal right hand man, was always there for the king no matter what he said to him.

"I like dancing!" Mort, is…well…crazier then Rico, but not Rico's crazy a scarier crazy.

"Mort shut up a little!" Julien screamed

Private leaps onto the top of their fence, he howls and then jumps onto their platform.

"FOSSA!" cried Julien

"AHHH!" scream Mort as he clutched to Julien's feet

"I don't think that's a fossa!" Maurice cried as he franticly search for something to defend himself with. Maurice grabs a leg of the throne and tugs it breaks off.

"You just broke my throne!" Julien scream more worried about his throne then the fact their lives were in danger.

"I'm sorry I actually want to live!" Maurice retorted.

Private charges for the lemurs with a hungry look in his face and his jaws opened.

"I hope this works…" Maurice muttered to himself. Maurice swings the stick and hits private in the head. Private is knocked off balance and then runs off to escape another beating.

"Maurice you saved the royal booty!"

"It was nothing" Maurice said modestly

Julien looks down and sees that mort is on his feet. "MORT YOU DARE THOUCH THE ROYAL FEET IN TIME OF CRISISY SITUATION?" Julien flings mort off his feet and into the wall.

In this rewrite, I combined chapter 1 and 2 also I changed my writing style personally I feel I did a better job please review those I can't trust myself when it comes to things like this. Also I don't know how I'm going to decipher Rico's talking this time might do it the same way might change it I'll probably keep it the same.