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I don't own Tokyo Mew Mew.
I rewrote this. Enjoy.
He couldn't stand to be away from her. The thought of her drove him nuts, but it also drove him to Cloud Nine, yes? His heart sunk as he breathed since he realized he wasn't with her. He couldn't see her to pat her head or make her feel better when she was down, sad, or alone. But, he couldn't describe how he felt at this moment. He choked on his spit and looked out the window.
A tear fell down his cheek and onto the icy ground. The air smelt like the scent of metal and nothingness. His depression devoured his soul, as if he was about to die right then and there. He couldn't stand any longer.
This boys' name is Kish. He's not exactly a boy, more like an alien with a broken heart.
The girl he loves is Ichigo. She's not exactly into him, though she misses him deeply somewhere in her soul.
She didn't know it, but she was deeply in love with him. She wanted to kill herself for rejecting him so many times, and so had he. Both completely were about to give up on love and hope itself.
You see, Ichigo was dumped long ago. Her ex, Masaya, had thought he should dump her since he had caused her so much pain in the past. He couldn't stand it, so they broke up. That crushed her to the point where she almost hung herself off a balcony. She also didn't sleep or eat.
Kish licked his tender lips gently as he sat back up after ten minutes on the floor. The feeling came back to his legs a minute later as he put his soft, warm hand onto the window. He pressed onto the glass and whispered:
"That's it."
It was raining down on Earth to the point where you can swim in the rain, so to speak. His mouth went dry as he saw Ichigo in a window, her head tilted as she nudged her forehead against her knees.
"Ichigo." He whispered.
She didn't hear him, not even a mutter.
"Ichigo." He said silently.
She peeked over her from the corner of her eye. She couldn't stand him, so she turned her head back towards her legs.
"What do you want?" Ichigo asked.
"You're love." Kish said.
"Who could ever love a thing like you?" Ichigo whispered, streaks of tears running down her cheeks.
He choked on his spit and tilted his head before teleporting away, heartbroken.
I don't know how I did this. But I did the best I could do with this couple. Please review.