Original Akuma no mi ideas

by Esaki Nalex

Possible Devil Fruit ideas and influences that I might use in future stories. IN NEED OF CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, NOT FLAMES! Please note that these ideas can also become the basis for other ideas or stories. They are not meant to be taken as unchangeable! Thanks for all your help!

1. Baria Baria no mi

Akuma no mi (Devil Fruit)

Idea #1

Name: Baria-Baria no mi (Barrier-Barrier Fruit)

Type: Paramecia

Appearance: A gold roma tomato with black spirals and a short star-shaped stem.

Power: The ability the create (form), control (move), and manipulate(change) barriers of any material. However, there must be a central focus (an anchor) in order to create a barrier.

Example: creating a barrier around a person and using something the person wears to keep it there (a necklace that protects the wearer)

Quick ideas: What is distance between islands? A barrier against traveling freely. Teleportation?

What is seastone? A barrier to stop the use of Akuma no mi. "Able" to swim?

When a barrier is controlled, does that mean it can go against gravity? Or make things unbreakable? Swimming? Teleportation? Time travel?

AN: It seems ok to me, if a little vague. Ideas? Constructive criticism? If something won't work explain why please. I'm thinking of maybe writing a small One Piece story soon and I might use this. Thanks for your help and keep reviewing!