I got this idea while watching the episode Going Under I hope you enjoy please read and review.
The scene.
The team is driving home from a seminar that Steler required they all go to. The team decides to car pool. So it is about 8:30pm and they are all crammed into Horaito's hummer and it is dumping rain. They are taking a back way and they are out of Tampa and on a dirt road somewhere between Miami And Tampa. The team have to cross a old wooden bridge over a medium sized river. The road is windy road and on a ledge. The road is dirt and slippery. The characters in this story are Horaito, Ryan, Calleigh , Alexx , Eric, and Natalia.
( Horaito's POV)
Boom, went the thunder outside the Hummer as we drove down the road. We had just sat the longest seminar in the history of seminars. The rain poured, drenching the car. The water rolled down the windshield in waterfalls. Behind me. I heard the occasional laugh of Eric or Ryan who were watching a movie on Eric's laptop. Behind them Calleigh and Natalia who were sitting in the very back were talking away about something unknown to me. Alexx who was sitting in the passenger seat beside me was playing solitaire on her iPod, all seemed to be peaceful.
The later we drove into the the night the harder the rain seemed to come down. The harder the rain came the winder the road got. The wind blew hard and the rain poured almost like we were in the middle of a hurricane. I shuttered when I thought of driving in a hurricane. I didn't want to do that again.
We were on a steep ledge and I was driving carefully and steadily making sure to go at the right speed. I didn't want to slip off the edge. Natalia and Calleigh voices were the only thing heard in the silence. The silence was interrupted when the unmistakable sound of metal slamming against metal was ripped the silence. The car was was slammed from the right side violently sending the car the spinning out of control. The car went barreling over the ledge. We rolled and flipped down the ledge of the mountain. I could hear the terrifying screams as flew from the edge of the hill. We slammed and thrown. The last thing I saw was a branch flying though the windshield.
I woke up to a wet feeling on my knees it seemed to be getting higher. I opened my eyes to darkness. Sheer terrifying darkness. Darkness like no other. I put my hand on my throbbing head. I felt a slippery substance on my fingers. Then the wetness had rose to my hips. I finally looked down and saw water creeping up. Cool black water was filling the cab. " God no this can't be happening" I thought to myself. I had to help the others.
" Hello." I manged to get out. " Is anyone awake." I asked. I waited but got no response. I needed to help my team. I would have to work quickly to help them all. I started by trying to lift my arm to unbuckle my seat belt. But a sharp pain in my elbow stopped. I couldn't see it but I knew my elbow was broken. So I lifted my other arm and undid the belt. I started to crawl out of my seat but I couldn't my legs wouldn't let me they were stuck under the collapsed steering wheel. The water in the cab was rising even quicker. I struggled to get the steering wheel off but it wouldn't budge. Then I tried and tried but the water was up to my neck and was getting higher. Then I stopped this was it this was the end. I let go of the wheel and let water finish filling the cab. It was too late for me or anyone.
Or was it.
That was the first chapter. Is it the end for Horaito and his team. Please review for chapter two.