Hey there guys,this is my second fic,but i have next to nil in experience so this might as well be my first,anyway it would be awesome if you guys gave me some feedback,suggestions are welcome but i have most of the story already planned out,anyway sit back while i tell the tale of Takato Shunshiro.
Takato's POV
As I slowly walked across the street,I looked sideways,seeing some orange-haired guy laying down some flowers for a little girl,as he turned I recognized his face
"Yo Ichigo!"
As my classmate Ichigo looked at me,some thugs came up behind him,quickly I pointed behind him while I dropped my bag on the ground.
Ichigo then yelled "Damn it,I thought you got the message!"
I quickly closed the gap between us,well over seven guys were around us.
I spoke "How is the the girl now?"
Ichigo was the only person other than me who could see spirits,as far as I of the punks rushed us,Ichigo kicked one in the gut,as his head fell from pain Ichigo´s knee connected with it,while I lunged at his buddy and grabbed his neck,even though I was shorter than Ichigo by a few inches and my muscles weren`nt as apparent I was as strong,I lifted him and threw my weight downwards,and smashing the concrete beneath me.
Three of the guys ran,the other two yelled "THIS AIN'T OVER PUNK!"
I simply replied"Yeah,Yeah,bring an ambulance next time!"
waving my unbloodied fist in the air,I slowly pulled out my phone and dialed emergency,as soon as I did so Ichigo and I kept walking away,on a steady rhythm.
Ichigo asked "Why are you here Takato?"
I replied "I was just walking around and spotted you."
Ichigo and I parted ways close to the Kurosaki Clinic,his dads job,even though he barely got any patients.
As I slowly walked home,a chilly wind messed my black hair,throwing two bangs on my left eye,Passing my hand over my eye to fix my of a sudden there was an extreme shaking on the ground,as I looked behind I found a huge black creature wearing some sort of white mask with blue patterns,as I ran i knew it was a spirit because I was the only one to react.
As I ran a big shockwave knocked me aside in the middle of the street,as the monster picked me up from the ground,choking me I started kicking,as my left hand fiddled my pockets to find my knife,an army relic that as far as I knew it was my dad's I grasped the knife I flung it at the monster,as it sank on his mask,blood gushed out.
"You filthy human,how dare you!"The monster cursed.
I retorted "You bastard call me filthy?have you ever looked at your own face?"
He angrily yelled "Silence human,meals don't speak!"
The monster pulled me closer,biting my shoulder,pain searing my arm,I felt like I was going to die,suddenly the monster dropped me,as I feel three meters from the phantoms shoulder height,I got up quickly and slowly limped away,trying to put as much distance between me and this nightmare,but the monster was more nimble than I thought,as he quickly grabbed me again,squeezing me with both hand,my bones breaking,suddenly a white light flashed from me,I felt...Strong,no longer feeling the pain I felt like death was grasping me,but when I opened my eyes,I saw myself wearing a black kimono,a katana sheathed behind my back,as I slowly pulled the blade,as if I had done it hundreds of times over,as the monster yelped with fear,a memory came into my mind,he was a hollow,I was a Shinigami,as i lifted my blade,I ran faster than i thought possible,and hacked the Hollow into pieces,then my mind went blank as I passed out.
Well,how did you people like the first chapter,id love some feedback,and next chapter will be coming soon.
This is going to be one of the few short chapters because this is the Prologue.