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Disclaimer: The Nintendo Company owns Pokémon, but don't worry 'cause as soon as the lawsuit goes through it will be mine! All mine!
Pikachu's POV
"Pi Pikachu!" I cried out to my little sister, Pi. She had run ahead to explore. Today was our first day out of the nest, and we both wanted to see as much as possible. I gave up on catching up with my sister and decided to enjoy the new freedom of the Viridian Forest. Our mom, PikachuPi, had warned us about many things, such as wild Pidgeotto, Fearow, Raticate, and Houndoom. She also warned us of humans, dangerous creatures who would take away my new freedom. I shivered at the thought. But I was snapped out of my thoughts by a loud "PIKACHU!" I rushed to find the sound, only to find my sister crawling away from a large Houndoom, it's young Houndour pups behind it. The mother was probably teaching it's young how to get a meal. I raced towards my sister, my back arched and feet spread out in a defensive position. "Pika?" I asked her. "Chu..." she mewed softly, a Burn on her heart shaped tail. Just then, I saw a Flamethrower come at me. I quickly crouched low and avoided the attack. One hit like that and we would both be lunch! I shot a powerful Thundershock and the Houndoom, as she countered with a Fire Fang. Twisting my back feet, I tucked my tail beside me, gathered energy up, and bolted forward with a Quick Attack. I hit her! That's when I noticed her defensive position. She was protecting her pups! So this time, I aimed a Thundershock at the Houndour to the left, and just like I thought, she jumped in to protect the young Dark Pokémon. She growled at me, and shot a Flamethrower at me. I tried to dodge, but I was too slow and was hit, full power! My body was sore, and a Burn had developed on my back. I tried to get up, but failed as the Houndoom came closer with her jaws glowing. This was it, I thought to myself. The ultimate attack, Crunch. I heard that it was a painful way to die. Cheeks sparking, I tried to fight, but it was useless. I closed my eyes, preparing for the blow, but it never came. Instead, I saw a human standing in the grass, a white coat on his shoulders. By his side was a Spearow. Thats when I noticed the Houndoom on her side, weak from a Peck attack. She growled, stood up, and left, her pups trailing behind her. The Spearow turned to me. "Spear Spearow?" he called. I was too weak to stop the human from coming closer. The human was healing my sister with a pink bottle. I weakly growled at him, startling him. "Don't worry Pikachu, it's just Hyper Potion." he called over to me. Pi stood up, shaking her body, then walked over to me. The old human looked at me carefully, then finally said to me, "This will be hard to fix. I'll take you to the Pokemon Centre." The human walked over to his bag, and pulled out a round object. It was red on top and white on the bottom. The sphere had a small button on it. I disliked it from the start. The object was too perfect to be safe. Too clean, too small, and too perfectly shaped. Even an Oran Berry had some lumps on it. The human crouched down, and before I could get away, hit me lightly on the head with it. I felt a tingling sensation throughout my body, then the sensation of separating and before I knew it, my world had gone black.
Pi's POV
Pi cried out sharply. Her brother, Chu, had just disappeared into the round item, and that scared her. "Where did he go?" she growled at the Spearow. "Somewhere safe." he replied. Suddenly, the Tiny Bird Pokémon disappeared into a beam of red light, just like Chu. The old human started to walk away, through the forest to the gravel path. He's gone, I thought to myself. His freedom and health taken away and replaced by a red and white sphere. That's when I started to cry, no one to hear it but the flocks of Pidgey going by.
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