Bella's Change
Crystal Tomaras
Disclaimer: Only in my dreams, do I own anything by Stephanie Meyer.
So. This is the preview to the first chapter. The next chapter will start off where this one left off. I think im doing ok beta-ing myself but anyone who interested please left me know.
Closing my eyes I remembered her face. Her smile that adorable blush she got. Opening them I looked down at the corpse in front of me. Looked at bellas lifeless form laying in front of me. Jacob was right, said that little voice in my head. She would have been better off with him and you know it.
I looked at her passive face and lowered my gaze to look at the rest of her body, visible cringing as I did so. Bruised, broken, it lay on my couch looking utterly battered and somehow stronger for it in some odd way. They were all wrong. Even Carlisle. Edward felt the venom-tears run down him face. They thought changing her would only make her immortal, that she would stay the same afterward. They didn't realize what would happen. That she was so unique, she had become something that had never existed before. Her heart still beat. Her skin was still warm. And her hair, still held that sweet, sweet smell.
He knelt down and buried his face in her hair before anyone could stop him. She was faster than any creature of the forest, and even faster then Edward. She was more graceful than Alice, and stronger than Emmett. And this was after the newborn super-strength had worn off. She had stayed the same in many ways. She still liked all the same things. But now she was confident. So very sure of herself.
These thoughts had passed through Edwards mind in a split second. He hadn't even realized that Jacob had dove at him when he had buried his face in her hair. Blinking up at Jacob who was pinning him down, he whispered brokenly, "Kill me. I deserve it. I killed her."
Next update should be later today actually.