Okay, I am proud to anounce that the lillykit in EradrinSkyleaf's story is in fact my oc! I was sooooo happy I practically screamed. Any whay please check her out. She is an amazing writer! Also, in this story, windclan are perfectionists


Lillykit's P.O.V.

"oh, Spottedkit, you are so beautiful!" The clan says, looking at Spottedkit's leapord-like pelt. "Your so skinny that you will surely catch plenty of rabbits. Your sister is too plump and plain pelted. We will give her to another clan for free because she has soooo many flaws" The windclan leader, Palestar, says, growling at me. That night at the gathering I have to walk along without anyone to help me. I am only 5 moons old. Palestar forces me over to the skyclan, thunderclan, riverclan, and shadowclan leaders. "I will give you this kit for free. She is too fat to chase prey and too clumsy to be any use to us" Palestar says shoving me away. "I will take her" Brightstar of shadowclan says, bringing me into a hug. "She is now a kit of shadowclan" she says and takes me over to a brown she cat. "Brightstar, my daughter, why do you have a kit?" The she kit askes, looking at me worriedly. "She is a kit from windclan that has been kicked out from her own clan. She will be my daughter and can forget about her old family. Can you PLEASE watch her for me, mother?" Brightstar pleaded, setting me up against the she cat. I nuzzle my new mother. "Of course, dear." The she cat says. Brightstar walks up the tall rock. "I am fernberry" the brown she cat says. And the leaders begin.


After the gathering.

My new mother, Brightstar, walks over and grasps my scruff and carries me to my new home. When we get there, the clan gathers around us. "My fellow clan mates" she says, putting her tail around me. "wingclan has there ways and has outcasted this kit. She will be my daughter. I expect her to be treated Fairley and no harm shall be done, Now good night." She says bringing me to her den. "This is your new father, nightshadow!" Brightstar says, leading me to a fullyblack tow with blue eyes. "Hi"He says and pulls him twords me. then the three of us cuddle toghether and sleep.


THE NEXT DAY

I woke up to see that mother and father had already gotton up. I go outside of the and look around the camp. She saw 4 kits padd up to her. There were to she kits and two toms. "Hi i'm Doepaw" a fawn colored kit with purple eyes said." These are my sibbings Moonkit, Leafkit, and Blackkit." Moonkit was a white kit with black paws and green eyes, Leadkit was a ginger tabby she kit with blue eyes and Blackkit was all black with one white paw and blue eyes. "Why were you in The leaders den?" Leafkit asked, staring at her. "Where's your mother? Who is she?" Asked blackkit who was sitting on a rock. "Its good to see the five of you getting along" a voice says behind us. I reconize mothers voice. "Lillykit was in your den!"Doepaw says. "Why was she in there?" "i see your parents didn't tell is my new daughter." Mother says, licking me between my ears. "Windclan cast me out just cause i am not like my sister. It seams she is the only one who wanted me to stay." I say and the kits huddle around me.