ZoLu fanfiction

Okay, so this is my first fanfiction I've ever done, and my first story ever written in english, so please understand the mistakes. I'm not even from an english-talking land, so yea.. Anyway:

Anime/Manga: One piece
Pairing: ZoLu (Zoro and Luffy)
Rating: M (due to future sexual content)

Let's start with the first chapter now :)

Chapter 1

Luffy was stuffing himself with all kinds of food, mostly meat. Zoro sat beside him and watched him, waiting for him to finish his meal. Zoro was already done eaten long time ago. He patientally waited for his capain.
Mugiwara no ichimi had docked at an Island. They had find out (or rather, Robin had find out) that this island was known for people disappearing without a trace. Of course, this didn't stop Luffy from getting exited and wanting to explore the island. Nami and Usopp had gone shopping, while Luffy and Zoro had gone to the closest restaurant. The rest of the crew waited at the ship.
"You done?" Zoro asked Luffy as he wiped his mouth.
"Aaaah! That was delicious!" he cheered.
"Yeah, capain. Let's go, shall we?" Zoro started to get up, before an old man stopped him. He had a scar on his throat, and weared black pants along with a blue blouse.
"Wait a minute, young men", he said as he smiled widely.
"Who're you, ossan?" Luffy asked.
"Are you even aware what you've got yourselves into?" The old man asked.
"Eh?" Both Zoro and Luffy said in confusion. He chuckled. "I guess you don't." They nodded slowly together.
The old man sat down on a chair in front of them. "Do you at least now the rumor of this island?"
"We heard it's known for people disappering without a trace", Zoro answered.
"Yeah, that's true", the old man said, "But there's also a lot of people here who have witnessed the people disappearing. One of those are me, I once saw my own daughter disappear."
"How?" Luffy asked, a bit curious.
"I don't really know where she went. But the stepped into a kind of machine. I have no idea where it took her, but in any case she did never come back. Since I know that you're pirates and don't know anything, I'm just warning you."
"What's the reason you're telling us this, ossan? We didn't really ask", Luffy said, he was a little confused. The old man didn't answer, he just chuckled. "Anyway, if you by any chance got there anyway, I want to give you this." He took out a picture of a young woman with long, dark hair and brown eyes. "This is my daughter, if you see here, please tell her that I miss her, remember her and love her."
"Ossan, we're not going there, so it's useless even giving us this picture", Zoro said.
"Just in case", the old man said, a little desperate, "I know there's a chance you could get there."
"Fine", Zoro said and took the picture, "If we see her, we will tell her."
Luffy grinned. "I'm sure you will se her again, ossan. But we gotta go! See ya", he said and he and Zoro left the restaurant.
"Ne, Zoro, can we explore this island a bit more, before we go back? I'm so pumped up by that story that ossan said."
"Don't tell me you believe that people disappear to a different world unknown to us? That's just ridiculous. They obviously died."
"Oi, Zoro, don't say that. I'm sure it is, and I'm gonna check it out. Wanna come with me?" Well, even if Zoro said no, his captain wouldn't give up. "Fine", he said and Luffy dragged him along by his arm. "C'mon, c'mon! Adventure, adventure!" He cheered. Zoro kept his face frowned as always, though.
Luffy dragged him around to alot of places, forgetting that they actually was going to find that weird machine. He dragged him to the amusement park and candy stores.
Now they were walking on the road and just talking.
"Ah! Zoro! I almost forgot the machine-thing, we gotta search for it before it's to late!" he started to get a bit frustrated and panicked.
"Luffy, just give up on it. We don't have the time", Zoro answered. He could see the sun going down the trees.
"Please, just a little while? Okay? Ne, Zoro!"
"Argh... Just for an hour, alright?" Zoro had no other choice but to give in to his captain, since he new Luffy wouldn't budge. "Fine, but no more. I don't really get it, Luffy. Why do you wanna find it so bad anyway?"
"Well... it's interesting, I wanna know. And I'm thinking of saving that ossans daughter, he seemed to really miss her", he answered.
They continued to search for one hour. But they didn't find anything. The sun was already down, and they realized they gotta go back to the Sunny Go. They started to walk, but something grabbed Luffys leg. It was a little kid, a boy. He looked like a homeless kid, but Luffy just looked at him with an expressionless face.
"My name is Pete", the boy began to say, "what are you searching for?"
"Nothin', we're just going back to our ship", Luffy answered.
"Are you guys pirates? I think I can recognize you from a wanted poster. But it's dark, so I can't really see much."
"My name is Monkey D. Luffy, and I'm the man who's gonna be the Pirate king."
"Luffy...? That infamous pirate! Are you joking?"
"This is Zoro, by the way. Heard of him too?"
"The pirate hunter Zoro?" exclaimed Pete. "R-really? Wow. Anyway, that's not why I stopped you. I was wondering if you could do me a favor."
"Sorry, kid", Zoro said, "but we're goin' back to our ship now, it's late. You should go home to your mom and sleep."
"Y-yeah... but could you please hear me out?"
"Yea", Luffy said and listened.
"I was watching you, actually. And I heard something about you looking for that machine that makes people disappear. I-I know where it is."
"WHAT? REALLY? SHOW ME", Luffy started saying but Zoro dragged his cheek and stretched it. "Oi, captain. We don't have the time. We gotta go back, remember?"
"Yeah, but just a little", Luffy said and had those damn puppy eyes, making it hard for Zoro to resist saying yes. Argh... he was so stubborn.
"Fine, show us fast, kid." Pete smiled widely. "Thank you so much." They started walking behind the boy.
"Well... why did you want to show it to us in the first place?" Zoro asked.
"My mother is in there, I would want to have her back... but I guess you don't even wanna go in there... people doesn't come back afterwards, after all."
When the boy stopped he had tears at the corners of his eyes. He was crying. "Well then, here it is."
They saw a big machine. It looked really weird, not something you would see at this place. Everything here seemed so old, while this machine thing looked... more modern, you could say. New. It also had a door. Luffy emediately ran off.
Oh, fuck! Zoro thought as he ran forward and stopped him.
"Are you crazy, Luffy? If you go in there, you'll disappear.
"S'okay s'okay!" he said as he was about to open the door. Zoro was weaker than Luffy, so it was really hard to hold him back.
"Please, Luffy!" As Luffy heard the desperation in his voice, Luffy stopped.
"What's wrong, Zoro? You know I ain't gonna disappear, don't you? I'll never leave you, or the rest of my nakama." Zoro slowly let go of him. As soon as he did this, Luffy ran towards the machine. Oi! No way! Zoro ran after him as they both fell in the machine.
The door shut.
And when it opened again, they were gone.