Original story by Sonto340
I read the story not too long ago, and saw that the author hasn't made any new chapters in a while, I really liked the story but was disappointed that there was no ending I figured I'd take the story, change the stories were made a little bit more sense, make a few corrections to some grammatical errors, and change a few parts I didn't really like too much. I hope you all like my redo of this, and remember to leave reviews.
Chapter 1: loss of sanity
I sat in the alley, I didn't know how, or why I was there, I just was, and I only remembered one thing, Amy.
I had been drinking a little bit earlier.
It was probobly becuse I had just had a bad day, a paticular bad day ending with Amy showing up at my house, and following me to my bedroom. She seemed like she had something on her mind, it seemed important.
"I'm sorry sonic, but I'm done with you." She said. I couldn't believe what I was hearing, the pink hedgehog that idolized me since she was young, she was done?
" What?" I asked in disbelief. She couldn't be telling the truth. A joke?
" It's true Sonic..." She said. " I got so tired of you, so tired of rejection, you just aren't worth it! You're not worth th trouble!"
As she started to walk out, I lost control, I saw red, and I did something I never thought I would do.
I sniffled. I thought about what I did. She'd never look at me again. I knew that much,for sure.
I grabbed her. She tried to brush off my hand, but I wouldn't let go. I turned her around, and stared at her.
She yelped, and tried to escape, but I wouldn't let go.
I pushed her onto my bed.
She squealed.
I put my weight onto her, making sure she wouldn't get up.
" S-Sonic Why?" She asked, fear heavy in her voice.
" I'll show you what you'll be missing!" I screamed in a mix of alcohol and rage, I'm certain I lost my sanity.
I tore her dress open, and she cried out. " Sonic! Please Stop!" Tears welled up in her eyes.
I banged my fist against the bed. How could I be so crazy? So blind?
I had already torn her dress to shreds, it lay tattered next to the bed. I grabbed her bra, ripping it off.
I massaged her right breast, moaning greatly.
She yelped in discomfort, pleading me to stop.
I wouldn't.
She simply cried.
"This is what you've always wanted, isn't it?" I shouted, blinded by anger.
She cried, but I pinched her nipples, I wanted her to hurt.
"you always wanted me inside you didnt you."
I prepare myself and begin rubbing my member.
I moaned sensually, and continued massaging her right breast.
She shook her head. "please dont do this." I slap her hard with the back of my hand.
I started to cry. How could I be so stupid?
I worked my way down to her thighs, and rubbed her through her panties, then i pulled them to the side. She started to cry, as I stuck my a finger into her.
She gasped.
I took my mouth, and stuck my toung inside her, tasting her. She tasted sweet. It left my mouth with a good taste. I craved more.
I quickly took my length, and shoved it into her. She gasped, and I continued to push myself into was still a virgin, and blood soon began to run on to my sheets.
After I was finished, I let her up, and threw her a tattered piece of her dress.
" You weren't worth my affection... you slut... If you tell anyone...you'll be sorry," I vowed.
tears ran down her face as she ran out the door.
I don't even know what happened next, I just know I got drunk, and ended up at Cream's house.
I think I thought I'd scar everyone Amy knew to assure no one would tell anyone, ever. I was digging a hole.
I'll never forgive my self for what I did there...
-I took out some parts that I didn't like too much and added some more energy to some other parts. It didn't change too much with this chapter though, I thought it was good, mostly grammatical errors here. I'll try to get the other chapters are soon as I can and once I get those up I'll be adding my own chapters continuing on from where the original author had stopped. If you like what I've done these leave reviews and tell me how I did.
Until next time, gamefreac