kingdom hearts high school years

chapter 1

Hi this is my FIRST time writing a kingdom hearts fic so I really don't know is it good or not but i hope you like it ;}

[ and my first one ever }

I DON'T OWN KINGDOM HEARTS

charter 1 a new beginning

"kairi " said her grandma.

"oh grandma" said kairi. " Wait kairi just a minute , i just cast a spell on you one day when you're in trouble, the light within you will lead you to anther. some one to keep you safe. " said Aqua

"There you are. Its's time to go." said her grandma"

" Hey, grandma can you please tell me the story again ?

" Again dear ''

"please? ''

" ok "

Long ago, people lived in peace , bathed in the warmth of loved the light . Then people began to fight over it. They wanted to keep it for themselves, And darkness was born in their heart. The darkness spread, swallowing the light and many people hearts. It covered everything, and the world disappeared. But small fragments of light survived, in the hearts of children. With these fragments of light, children rebuilt the lost world. It the world we lived in now. But the true light sleeps, deep within the darkness. That 's why the worlds are still scattered, divided from each other. But someday, a door to the innermost darkness will open, and the true light will return. So listen, child even in the deepest darkness, their will always be a light to guide you. Believe in the light and the darkness will never defeat you. Your heart will shine with its power and push the darkness away." do you understand kairi ?

" yes grandma "

{the same day }

"xi-xi where are you my child " said her mother

" I'm here mommy " said xion

" xion there you are it time to go"

ok ! said xion

" Mommy is it true the light sleeps in the darkness ?" said xion

"yes But someday, a door to the innermost darkness will open, and the true light will return. So listen, child even in the deepest darkness, there will always be a light to guide you. Believe in the light and the darkness will never defeat you. Your heart will shine with its power and push the darkness away. But remember xion you're a very important no one can make you feel like nothing. do you understand xion ? "

"yes mommy "

so is it ok pleases review

i think it really bad or it good its up to you