Hey peoples! This is an idea I had for a story.
"I can't believe you did that, Freddie! I'm NEVER talking to you again!" She ran away, so upset she didn't care if people saw her crying.
"Who's there? Hey! Let go of me! HELP!" Then all Freddie saw was blackness.
Freddie opened his eyes and saw nothing. He tried to sit up and hit his head. He was in a small box, laying down.
"Where am I?" He hit the sides, in an attempt to get out. When it didn't give in, he started hyperventilating.
"HEEELP!"
"Where's Freddie?"
"Like I care...Wait what is this?" Sam picked up an envelope off the floor, opened it, and read. She gasped at what she saw and dropped the the letter. She put her hand over her mouth with tears in her eyes. Carly was really starting to get scared. She picked it up and gasped as well.
"A ransome note? ...For Freddie?"
Sam might've hated Freddie but he was her friend. She grabbed the phone.
"Freddie! You need to hang on! Do you hear me? You can't die! Because...because I LOVE YOU! I love you, Fredward Benson! Don't die on me!"
Any good? Suggestions?