BPOV
AN-I do not own any recognisable characters or places in this story. Those characters belong to the incredible Stephenie Meyer and her fantastic imagination. I am just a person who is putting them through numerous escapades and much trauma to entertain myself and others.
Edward?
I heard a growl from behind me and a smile danced across my lips.
"Now, now, play nice." I teased pretending to pout.
Edward jumped from behind me and grabbed my waist capturing me in a steadfast hold smiling into my ear he whispered "Whenever don't I Ms. Swan"
I giggled "Well holding a young lady who is not your wife or your fiancée captive may be"
Edward flashed me my favourite crooked grin temporarily dazzling me. "That is something I would be very happy to change" He said. "Well then let me go" I teased. "You know that's not what I mean" he pouted and somehow I don't think he was pretending. He did move away from me though which was when I grabbed his shirt and pulled him back "I didn't really mean let go!"
I let out a sigh. Last night had been as close to perfect as it could get with Edward's damn morals. The whole family had been out hunting thanks to my deal with Alice so it had been just the two of us, in about five minutes though they are all going to come bursting through the door and Alice was going to take me on a shopping trip for two days. I didn't completely regret my deal with Alice, the only thing I regretted was saying she could buy me anything she wanted with no enforceable budget. That I was sure to regret.
Edward traced my lips with a smile on his perfect god like face. "There can only be one reason you have on that highly horrified face." He let out a laugh that was as pure as gold but so much more desirable. "Come on Bella you never know you may even enjoy your shopping trip. I am the one who should be annoyed your abandoning me for a whole two days, for my sister whatever am I to do" I would have felt much sorrier for him if he hadn't been smirking the whole time. Just as I was about to tell him so the door practically exploded off its hinges as Alice yelled out in a voice that was much louder than necessary "Times up Bella your mine now" I knew that the very, very evil grin on Alice's face could only mean terrible things for me.
"Cheer up Bella" Alice said "This is going to be fun"
Please review this is my first fanfic and I need encouragement/constructive criticism and I'm not sure if I should go on