i m the newest fanfic writer on the block...i m a cross between a venus and
mercury adept...i also made all of your favorite adepts into
chibis!!!except for ivan,i didnt have to shrink him...
ivan-*casts spark plasma* *is fried*.......i dont think i need another one of those*makes ivan a chibi* chibi ivan-thank you chibi mia-*casts pure ply on me* thanks *restores mia and one person of her choice* mia-I PICK ISSAC!!! issac-thanks mia:)*hugs* chibi garet-*doesnt notice he got shrunk* chibi ivan-........this doesnt realy make any sense,can we just start the storie please chibi jenna-yeah,standing around here isnt much fun mia-*is kissing issac* issac-*stops for a second to say*yeah it is*starts kissing again* chibi sheba-nasty! chibi alex-thats my gf u *cencored*!!!!!*attacks issac only to get burnt to a crisp by garet*
ok,lets just start the storie now....i think this would make a good tv series....its kinda an inuyasha golden sun mix....with a bit of real life mixed in it,enjoy!
the night of sorrows
it was like most nights...issac and friends weant to this place were you play paint ballevery friday.issac and mia were always on a team,jenna and garet were always on a team,ivan and sheba were always on a team,and felix was on a team with piers."ok,mia,i will take the front,and u take the back."said issac,then mia said"ok,we will protect eachother,no matter what"then,the starting alarm weant off!issac spied piers after about 5 seconds,he had dropped his gun when.....DADADADADADADADADADADADA!!!mia was struck 20 times in the shoulder by felix!issac then whent to shoot when mia weakly picked up her gun and shot felix right between the eyes spraying paint all over his gogles!felix had fallen!"r u ok mia"shouted issac,then he held her in his arms before she fainted......issac then sniped out piers,wich knocked out felixes team!that only left jenna,garet,sheba,and ivan.sheba and ivan looked like easy targets if they werent so quick...issac got shot in the back of the head 6 times...reandering him helpless...but his will to protect mia was too strong,he shot ivan right in the chest 15 times,practicly killing ivan!then with the best of aim he took out sheba!and with great betrayal...jenna shot garet in the forehead only inches away from him!he had fallen....then,jenna jumped in the air and started to shoot at mia!DADADADADADADADADADADADADADADADA!!!issac jumped in the path of the bullets....wich had left him clinging for life...it apeared that jenna's team((i mean jenna))had won...once everyone had recovered enough to start walking home...they saw a small boy on the ground,he had been knocked out,his close had been sliced and his legs pinned to the ground with short swords......they quickly brought him back to issacs house...wich then issac got a big glass of water of life,and made the kid drink it.....but mia was curious how he had gotten there and how he was so badly wounded and still alive....the boy moved a little...he was asleep.the next morning,jenna and mia got up early to check on him."i wonder how he got into vale...i dont ever remember seeing him here..."said jenna "whoever he is,he must have been through a lot to survive that attack.the kid started to move a little.....then his eyes opened slowly..."he is awake!" choroused mia and jenna."were...were am i..."said the kid."you r in vale"said mia."what happened...i can hardly move my legs"......mia then said"u were pinned to the ground with short swords...do you remember what happened to you,whats your name,and how old r u"he then said"my name is inualex....i am 12...all i remeber is finding these two rocks...they were strange looking...i picked them up...and strange things started to happen...whenever i got mad...there was a small earthquake...i was in a fight,my friend was helping me...he had fallen in battle...and i was able to revive him,and then,i made a stone spire fall from no were...and it felled the kid who i was fighting..."issac woke up and whent down stairs and greeted everone,inu told him his name,and then issac asked him if he wanted sword lessons,and he agreed,then,issac gave him a short sword.after everyone ate breakfast,issac and inu whent outside to practice with the swords."ok,the first thing u need to know to use a sword is how you are comfortable standing and holding the blade,then,u stop thinking about anything that doesnt have to do with the battle you are in,ok"said issac,inu then replied"ok,i will do my best*draws his short sword*i am ready now"inu did rather well for his first time,so issac asked if he was up to a match with dull blades,and inu axcepted.the battled for hours on end...untill issac finaly won.it was a very tough match betweent he two,but it was obvious that issac would win."tomorrow,i am going to try to teach you how to use physenergy,do you think you are up to it after todays training"said issac.inu then nodded and with that,everyone weant to sleep...but that night was a repeat of what happened many years ago...another storm had struck!this time,noone knew the bolder was going to fall....and so noone escaped in time...vale had been destroyed... when they awoke the next morning...sheba was trapped under a peice of bolder,mia was next to inu,who was in a giant crater...issac and garret were safe,jenna was fine,she was unharmed and she was still asleep((i am not realy surprised...))ivan was near sheba,he was also wounded pretty badly...when they awoke,the put a bunch of mats were issacs house once stood,and put mia,sheba,ivan,and inu on them.issac had a bit of trouble getting some water of life,so he had to go to imil and get some water of herms...but he forgot a bottle and had to go all the way back home to get another one...once he finaly got the water...he used it on every one...once everyone had been revived,they got something to eat...then they all decided they had to travle to vault,the nearest town,cause now that vale had been destroyed...they had to go somewere safe till they had all recovered...but there was a problem...inu and mia werent moving...they were hardly breathing...they didnt make it to vault in time save inu...he had fallen...he wouldnt be able to be revived for much longer,since mia could heal,she was able to last much longer...they finaly reached vault...they revived mia and inu,then,on the outscurts of town,issac taught inu how to use physenergy,wich meant he had to choose a type of adept,he had a hard time deciding,but finaly decided to become a venus adept,and would aid the adepts in their travles.but inu doesnt have a ton of energy cause he had to stay alive so that he could be revived...but he is very swift and protective,he isnt that strong either,but since he is skilled with a sword and aim,he uses his short sword to defeat his oponints...he and ivan had become good friends cause he was only 2 years older than him((ivan is 15))they knew what the other was going through,and unerstood eachother very well...whenever their friends got into trouble,they were very agresive to defeat them,they were also very clever,but they never knew what they were...they werent normal humans...on their adventures,they decided to go to jupiter and venus light house to see what their hiddin pasts...wich may hide many good times,or horrible secrets...
so waddya think of my first fanfic
issac-cool mia-fame is ours:) chibi ivan-why do they get to be normal and not chibis
cause i like them chibi ivan-so u dont like us... its not that,they r just a little more involved then everyone else
anyway,wait till part two when the crew goes into the newest version of colloso,the one with laser tag!?check it out,it'll be called tag team teens
*plays ending theme while the scroll thingy's go down* writtin by-alex ideas by-alex directed by-alex characters from-golden sun special thanks to-the adepts of golden sun chibi's created by-alex
cya next time adepts...
ivan-*casts spark plasma* *is fried*.......i dont think i need another one of those*makes ivan a chibi* chibi ivan-thank you chibi mia-*casts pure ply on me* thanks *restores mia and one person of her choice* mia-I PICK ISSAC!!! issac-thanks mia:)*hugs* chibi garet-*doesnt notice he got shrunk* chibi ivan-........this doesnt realy make any sense,can we just start the storie please chibi jenna-yeah,standing around here isnt much fun mia-*is kissing issac* issac-*stops for a second to say*yeah it is*starts kissing again* chibi sheba-nasty! chibi alex-thats my gf u *cencored*!!!!!*attacks issac only to get burnt to a crisp by garet*
ok,lets just start the storie now....i think this would make a good tv series....its kinda an inuyasha golden sun mix....with a bit of real life mixed in it,enjoy!
the night of sorrows
it was like most nights...issac and friends weant to this place were you play paint ballevery friday.issac and mia were always on a team,jenna and garet were always on a team,ivan and sheba were always on a team,and felix was on a team with piers."ok,mia,i will take the front,and u take the back."said issac,then mia said"ok,we will protect eachother,no matter what"then,the starting alarm weant off!issac spied piers after about 5 seconds,he had dropped his gun when.....DADADADADADADADADADADADA!!!mia was struck 20 times in the shoulder by felix!issac then whent to shoot when mia weakly picked up her gun and shot felix right between the eyes spraying paint all over his gogles!felix had fallen!"r u ok mia"shouted issac,then he held her in his arms before she fainted......issac then sniped out piers,wich knocked out felixes team!that only left jenna,garet,sheba,and ivan.sheba and ivan looked like easy targets if they werent so quick...issac got shot in the back of the head 6 times...reandering him helpless...but his will to protect mia was too strong,he shot ivan right in the chest 15 times,practicly killing ivan!then with the best of aim he took out sheba!and with great betrayal...jenna shot garet in the forehead only inches away from him!he had fallen....then,jenna jumped in the air and started to shoot at mia!DADADADADADADADADADADADADADADADA!!!issac jumped in the path of the bullets....wich had left him clinging for life...it apeared that jenna's team((i mean jenna))had won...once everyone had recovered enough to start walking home...they saw a small boy on the ground,he had been knocked out,his close had been sliced and his legs pinned to the ground with short swords......they quickly brought him back to issacs house...wich then issac got a big glass of water of life,and made the kid drink it.....but mia was curious how he had gotten there and how he was so badly wounded and still alive....the boy moved a little...he was asleep.the next morning,jenna and mia got up early to check on him."i wonder how he got into vale...i dont ever remember seeing him here..."said jenna "whoever he is,he must have been through a lot to survive that attack.the kid started to move a little.....then his eyes opened slowly..."he is awake!" choroused mia and jenna."were...were am i..."said the kid."you r in vale"said mia."what happened...i can hardly move my legs"......mia then said"u were pinned to the ground with short swords...do you remember what happened to you,whats your name,and how old r u"he then said"my name is inualex....i am 12...all i remeber is finding these two rocks...they were strange looking...i picked them up...and strange things started to happen...whenever i got mad...there was a small earthquake...i was in a fight,my friend was helping me...he had fallen in battle...and i was able to revive him,and then,i made a stone spire fall from no were...and it felled the kid who i was fighting..."issac woke up and whent down stairs and greeted everone,inu told him his name,and then issac asked him if he wanted sword lessons,and he agreed,then,issac gave him a short sword.after everyone ate breakfast,issac and inu whent outside to practice with the swords."ok,the first thing u need to know to use a sword is how you are comfortable standing and holding the blade,then,u stop thinking about anything that doesnt have to do with the battle you are in,ok"said issac,inu then replied"ok,i will do my best*draws his short sword*i am ready now"inu did rather well for his first time,so issac asked if he was up to a match with dull blades,and inu axcepted.the battled for hours on end...untill issac finaly won.it was a very tough match betweent he two,but it was obvious that issac would win."tomorrow,i am going to try to teach you how to use physenergy,do you think you are up to it after todays training"said issac.inu then nodded and with that,everyone weant to sleep...but that night was a repeat of what happened many years ago...another storm had struck!this time,noone knew the bolder was going to fall....and so noone escaped in time...vale had been destroyed... when they awoke the next morning...sheba was trapped under a peice of bolder,mia was next to inu,who was in a giant crater...issac and garret were safe,jenna was fine,she was unharmed and she was still asleep((i am not realy surprised...))ivan was near sheba,he was also wounded pretty badly...when they awoke,the put a bunch of mats were issacs house once stood,and put mia,sheba,ivan,and inu on them.issac had a bit of trouble getting some water of life,so he had to go to imil and get some water of herms...but he forgot a bottle and had to go all the way back home to get another one...once he finaly got the water...he used it on every one...once everyone had been revived,they got something to eat...then they all decided they had to travle to vault,the nearest town,cause now that vale had been destroyed...they had to go somewere safe till they had all recovered...but there was a problem...inu and mia werent moving...they were hardly breathing...they didnt make it to vault in time save inu...he had fallen...he wouldnt be able to be revived for much longer,since mia could heal,she was able to last much longer...they finaly reached vault...they revived mia and inu,then,on the outscurts of town,issac taught inu how to use physenergy,wich meant he had to choose a type of adept,he had a hard time deciding,but finaly decided to become a venus adept,and would aid the adepts in their travles.but inu doesnt have a ton of energy cause he had to stay alive so that he could be revived...but he is very swift and protective,he isnt that strong either,but since he is skilled with a sword and aim,he uses his short sword to defeat his oponints...he and ivan had become good friends cause he was only 2 years older than him((ivan is 15))they knew what the other was going through,and unerstood eachother very well...whenever their friends got into trouble,they were very agresive to defeat them,they were also very clever,but they never knew what they were...they werent normal humans...on their adventures,they decided to go to jupiter and venus light house to see what their hiddin pasts...wich may hide many good times,or horrible secrets...
so waddya think of my first fanfic
issac-cool mia-fame is ours:) chibi ivan-why do they get to be normal and not chibis
cause i like them chibi ivan-so u dont like us... its not that,they r just a little more involved then everyone else
anyway,wait till part two when the crew goes into the newest version of colloso,the one with laser tag!?check it out,it'll be called tag team teens
*plays ending theme while the scroll thingy's go down* writtin by-alex ideas by-alex directed by-alex characters from-golden sun special thanks to-the adepts of golden sun chibi's created by-alex
cya next time adepts...