Harry breathed a sigh of relief. He made it to the platform on time. He was a going to his sixth year at Hogwarts. He said "Hi" to his friends Hermione Granger and Ronald ("Ron for short") Weasley. They all boarded the train bound for Hogwarts. He couldn't wait the last 5 years at Hogwarts had been very strange and exciting. He of course couldn't wait to see what else he was going to go through. After the train ride through the countryside that separated London from Hogwarts. They finally made it Hogwarts. Harry saw the castle and said to himself "here we go". After the great feast and a good night's sleep. Everyone get ready to go their first class. On the way Hermione and Harry get lost and stumble into a unknown hallway. The room was dark a little window let a little light in to see it was a old classroom. Hermione of course was freaking out. She had never been late on the first day of school. The door was automatically lock after they stumbled in there. They tried to unlocked it with magic but it look like it could be opened from the other side by hand. Harry and Hermione looked at each other and sighed. How were they going to get out of there. Harry suddenly looked at Hermione panicking and something strange happened she looked different. Not a bad different but just different she looked like he had never seen her before. And the strange thing was all he wanted do with her is hold her in his arms and kiss her.
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