This is just a preview of my first story. Part of the reason for my account on is because of this story that has been in my head for a while now and won't stop bothering me. I decided, even though I'm not that good a writer that I should at least try to write it. Please no flames but some help would be nice, and some reviews. If i have any information wrong tell me please and thank you. xXStarBurst104Xx
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Chloe POV
It has been a little over a year since escaped the Edison Group and we have finally begun to pick up the pieces of our shattered lives. We had all agreed we wanted privacy so we moved into a 4 bed, 2 baths, two-story Victorian house in the woods of a small town called Crestwood located in where the nearest city was about 5 miles. Tori and I shared a room as did Simon and Derek but Aunt Lauren and Kit have their own rooms. We had settled in and have been living there for the time being. We have also been all practicing on our powers, except me of course but, I like to help as much as I can with the others.
Our lives were getting less complicated and easier then we read that name on that list.
When we escaped, Tori had got a list of other potential supernatural kids like us and we have been trying to reach some of them to tell them or warn them about what might happen and what we went through. Then one night, Tori and I started to go over the names on that list and then we saw a name that nearly gave me a heart attack. On the list had a name that read:
Name: Lucinda Souza
The information that followed was just as shocking.
Age: 16
Species: Unknown
Parents Names: Unknown
Parents Species: Father -Werewolf Mother-Angel
Relative(s) Alive: Derek Souza
Relative(s) Species: Werewolf
I read it over and over and over again. Each time I read it hoping I wasn't reading it right; that it was my eyes playing tricks on me but it wasn't. Each time I read it over it was still there. I couldn't process the information I just read, so my brain just stopped working all together and I just stared at it.
"Derek has a sister?" I thought still not able to get my head wrapped around the idea.
I looked over to Tori and she was just as dumbstruck as I was. She just stared at the screen of the computer before snapping out of her trance and yelling at the top of her lungs, "Derek get down here!"
He then came running inside the room by the look on his face probably expecting us to be under attack or me hurt in some stupid way only I could be hurt in.
"Derek," I said finally finding my voice, "you should look at this." I said as I pointed to the computer screen.
He walks over to where I am sitting at the computer and looks at the where I'm pointing on the screen looking confused and intrigued. After he read it he read it again and again and again till I said "Derek?"
He turned to me and opened his mouth to say something only to be cut off by Simon who shouted, "Derek has a sister?"
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So should i keep writing or not you decide and creative advice would do lovely her thx xXStarBurst104Xx