Hi everybody! Well, this is my first fic in English and I'm a little nervous because English is not my mother language. I'm Argentinean (from Latin America), so I speak in Spanish. Well… To be honest, the grammar it's very basic but I hope you like this.
Warning: This is a Peter/Susan if you don't like it please don't read!!!
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.
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Chapter one: Another war.
"Can you believe that a year has passed since the coronation?" Lucy asked Edmund during breakfast one morning. Peter, Edmund and Lucy were in the dining room on a beautiful and sunny morning.
"Nope" Edmund replied taking a bite out of an apple.
"It doesn't feel like it" His little sister said "Does it?"
"Yeah," He said, then he looked at his eldest brother "What do you think Peter?"
"Eh? Well… I don't know" said Peter slightly disheveled as he was looking through the window at the beautiful gardens of Cair Paravel "I think that Lucy is right… What was the question again?"
"Is it just me or you are a little lost?" asked Edmund raising an eyebrow.
"Nah Ed he's lost" Lucy answered.
"Hey guys, changing the subject, any one of you seen Susan?" asked Peter.
"Maybe in the lake I swear she's in love with that place" Edmund replied.
"Probably" said Lucy "She spends all her spare time there"
"Yeah" Edmund said "Well Peter there's your answer. Susan is in the lake"
"How did you know?" said a voice coming from the door, the other three turned around to see Susan.
"You're joking! You spend every waking moment in there, it's slightly obvious" the former exclaimed.
"Mmm he's right you know Su" Lucy said. Peter just nodded his head in agreement.
"Well hello to you too" Susan said reaching for an apple and taking a bite
"Hey Su?" asked Lucy looking at her sister.
"Yes Lucy" Susan said after finishing her apple
"Now we've established that you were in the lake, what were you doing?" asked the youngest of the four.
"Nothing special, I have a friend there. That's all" said Susan with one hand on her hips.
"Oh, that's all" said Peter looking a little relieved.
"A friend? Who?" said Lucy with interest.
"A water elf, her name is Seiku. I met her the first time I went to the lake" replied Susan as she turned to the door "and now if you excuse me, I'll be practicing my archery"
When she left the room the others started to look to each other.
"Is it just my imagination or has she became very mysterious?" said Lucy curiously "I don't think that she was with her 'friend' all that time"
"You don't have to exaggerate" said Peter "She has a new friend, that's all"
"If you say so" Lucy said frustrated "Mr High King"
Meanwhile, Susan was practicing archery outside.
"Maybe I should tell them, but…Well, Peter will never believe me if I tell him anyway"-Susan thought as she released an arrow.
"You haven't told them yet?" a voice said behind her.
"Seiku! My god, don't do that!" said a surprised Susan. Behind her was a tall elf with long blonde hair, beautiful green eyes and pale skin, she was wearing a light blue dress and her hair fell over her back.
"Sorry, I didn't mean to scare you" said the elf with a smile.
"It's ok" Susan replied "Oh, and to answer your question, no I haven't told them yet"
"Why not?" said Seiku.
"Because they won't believe me" said Susan crossing her arms over her chest "They will never believe that I'm not going to the lake, but learning to use a sword"
"Oh come on Susan. No sane person would spend all their time at some lake" Seiku said raising her hands.
"Are you saying that my siblings think I'm insane?" Susan asked
"No, I'm saying they don't believe you're spending all your time at the lake!" Her friend answered
"Anyway they think I'm weak" Susan said with fire in her eyes "They think I can't fight in a battle. Why would they believe I as Edmund puts it 'spend every waking moment' learning to use a sword"
"Well you're very good with the sword and you're not weak" said Seiku with a smile have
"You said that because you are my friend" Susan said "but they are my siblings, they have to bother me it's their job"
"If you say so, but I really think that you are very good with a sword" said Seiku "You've been practicing with it for four months!"
"Yeah, and they haven't noticed it yet" Susan said angrily. She drew another arrow and prepared to shoot it when Seiku spoke.
"That's cause you haven't told or shown them, but that's besides the point, I think that you only want one of them to notice" Seiku said with a smirk. When Susan heard this she released the arrow without thinking and missed her target.
"What are you talking about?" Susan said trying to hide her burning face.
"I'm talking about Peter" said the water elf.
Susan didn't say anything but she knew that Seiku was right.
"Seiku is right" she thought and her blush deepened "I do think about him a lot"
"I know how you feel about Peter" Seiku continued her smirk staying on her face "You love him"
Susan opened her eyes surprised and dropped her bow. "Of course I love him he's my brother"
"Don't play dense, you know what I mean"
Seiku was right, Susan really didn't know when this began, but that didn't really matter. The point is that she had loved him since long time ago, but she never had the courage to tell him. And, certainly, she didn't want to. She always knew that her feelings were wrong, that it was a sin, but she couldn't help it.
"Yeah, you are right, I love him" Susan said clammily "but I shouldn't feel this about him!"
"Why not?" Seiku said innocently.
"Because he is my brother! This type of love is forbidden!" said Susan and put her hands on her face "It's a sin!"
"It is?" Seiku asked
"Of course, Incest" said the other
"In what?"
"You don't know what is?" Susan said surprised.
"No, should I?'
"No I don't think so, I have to go" Susan walked off muttering to herself and smoothing her dress.
"Works every time" Seiku rubbed her hands together before diving into the lake.
End of the chapter.
Kibumi: Well that's the first chapter! Hope you like it! Oh! First Of All a lot of thanks to Rosemary, how do the beta for me! Thank you so much!
Well, nothing more, enjoy!
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Kibumi Wong