Hi all, this is my first attempt at Saiyuki fic... And it turned out to be a poem about Gojyo and Dokugakuji. It's not so much about kinship but rather the tragedy that befell the family. Please review and give me some feedback! Tell me if you like it =)
Disclaimer: I do not own Saiyuki and its characters.
I hope you enjoy!
Eyes closed in submission
The bloodiness in a child hidden
He waited for his death
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Seeing the world again
In haziness
Eyes opened to a fallen woman
A sight he never wished to comprehend
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The heavy breathing—a tired sound
And the tightening of his brother's fist
He could hear them all
But not the drumming heart he heard so loud before
From himself
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She too, the mess of hair and dress
Too quiet for him to bear
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"Jien"
The only name he could wake
Was it a thought or a voice?
He could care less
Because his brother did not raise his head
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An intruding noise in their last serenity
Was an ungraceful breath
Escaping
It became a harsh sob that rang
"Gojyo"
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Red pools—in his eyes, on the floor
Reflected the water on Jien's face
The sting across his cheeks
More than any pain he had bred
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"Gojyo"
A worry or an apology
He could care less
It was the end of serenity
And who said it ever began?
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