Angel:Please keep in mind that is my first Fanfic...But all Criticizing is welcome because i want to know how to improve. It might be a little..

Chat: Or Alot

Angel: *sweatdrops* R-Right or a lot bad but I want to know what you think.

Ladybug: Oh don't forget the disclaimer

Angel: Ah Merci Ladybug but why don't you have the honours

Ladybug: Angel does not own anything except her own mind and wants to keep it that way

"Let Marinette go Volpina" Chat Noir shouted

Apparently Volpina wasn't finished with her revenge against Ladybug and Chat Noir but she now had Marinette. Dangling. On top of the Eiffel Tower. Yet again.

"Haha. Give me your miraculous then we can talk" Volpina laughed swinging Marinette around by her wrists.

HawkMoth really turned up the heat on this akuma because never before has anyone been turned twice. But Lila proved that firsthand because not too laong ago they were in this exact situation but with Adrien instead of Mari. Volpina taunting them once again.

"I think you know we can't do that Lila!" Ladybug shouted. Like before they were just below the villain in case Volpina decided to drop the shy girl that Chat has come to know.

"You WILL call me volpina and you WILL give me your miraculous or little Mari here will have to say goodbye to Paris"

"Why are you doing this? Marinette is nice and wouldn't hurt anyone! What did she do?" Ladybug seemed surprised by this outburst. He genuinely cared for her. Last time he knew it was an illusion of course but he can't know for sure this time. He had to play it safely so he can't risk it. She was Chat's friend. One of his closest friends.

Okay yes Marinette had been come out of her shell lately but she still stuttered around him and couldn't say more than a sentence at a time without making a fool of herself. But she still made an effort and he was thankful for that. Plus working for his father was a bit intimidating because the air around him demanded respect where it was needed.

Not only that but Marinette was extremely patient(she needed to be with chloe all the time) and cared passionately for people around her. Adrien and Marinette's friendship was still a work in progress, but it was slowly going somewhere. She would demolish him and Super Mecha Smash, bring baked goods from her parents' bakery, design some of the Agreste clothing, and in rare moments where she was overly confident, even tease Adrien because she could be sassy of course and he loved it.

"What's she done? Oh she has done a lot" Volpina lifted two fingers off Marinette's wrist. Chat tensed knowing what was to come next. "She is my competition"

"Wait what? Competition?" Chat repeated confused. "Why would Mari be competition?"

"It's obvious that she is in love with him! She is always around him! Taking all of his precious time away from everyone else" Volpina sneered as Ladybug and Chat tried wrap their minds of what they were just told.

Ladybug couldn't believe the Lila noticed. Chat on the other hand couldn't that Mari, sweet little innocent Mari, loves him.

She loves me?

Eh? What'd you think of the first chapter? Was it bad? Was it Good? Was it in the middle? YAY or NAY? Thanks!

*Muah kisses*