Erm, yeah... so this was sparked by a writing elective I'm taking at school... no one seems to write good season 1 fics anymore. That makes me sad. MY FIRST FANFIC EVAH!!!!!!!!!!!
YOSH... short, sweet, to the point
Zuko's thoughts as he looks for Iroh when he's kidnapped... yeah
Disclaimer: I don't own avatar, cuz if I did, people other than 7 year olds would have won the OC contest. (yes, i'm still bitter about that)
The boy was never able to find any other evidence. All he found was a sandal; small and brown in the vastness of the road. He rode further and further from the springs where he had last seen his uncle, his rhino trudging along the dusty road. The dust floated around, catching in the splits of his armor, making it creak and moan like an anguished soul. Anguished souls burning, burning in the fiery pain that his father had caused with his worldly conquest. The boy felt no more honor to his father, no warm glow to the dictator of pain and suffering, the raven on death wings, sending legion after legion of red clad men to destroy the balance of the world. Balance, which the father believed, would bring his end. The boy suddenly stopped, broken from his thoughts by a pungent smell piercing the air. He glanced down, annoyed by the carrier of the smell, and his eyes landed on a sandal. He dismounted the rhino, and picked up the sandal as though contaminated. He sniffed it, and then sighed. "Yep," Zuko said, "that's Uncle Iroh."
HOKAY!! Please PLEASE review... cuz I'm a sucker like that... and even though it sucked, I would appreciate something!
-jj.moa-