my first code geass poem.

I do not own code geass this are all properties of the owners


I remember then.
I remember now.
the path i choose
of blood and loneliness

i wore a mask
to hide my tears
to seal my feelings
to seal my heart

i chose destruction
i chose betrayal
i chose death

i played god
and payed the price

to my grey witch
you granted my wish
and gave me everything
you asked but one wish
a wish i couldn't fulfill

i am your warlock
you are my witch
we where partners

to my sister
you gave me smiles
i gave you tears
you gave me joy
i leave you the future

i am a prince
i am a brother
but most of all
i am leolouch

to my friend
i loved you as a brother
you fought me till the end
i stole your angels life
in the end you stole mine

i stole your future
and gave you a mask

to my red knight
you gave me your loyalty
you gave me your heart
i gave you tears
and a broken heart

the end is near
i bathed in my blood

i am the devil king
i carry the hate of the world
i am leolouch vi britania


please review I don't mind if its bad or good but pls review my first poem.