This is my first fan fiction, so please go easy on me, and read and review guys!
Chapter One
'Sorry I'm late guys.' Mumbled Zoey as she ran into the cafe and stopped in the doorway to catch her breath.
'It took you long enough.' Replied Elliot casually.
'Well, unlike you Ellie, some people have work to do.' snapped the flustered redhead.
Ellie had sort of become a nickname for Elliot, and Zoey called him it simply to annoy him.
'Oh yeah? Like what? Being all lovey-dovey with your boyfriend?' chuckled Elliot as he gagged.
Mark was Zoey's crush, and they had been going out with him for ages. However, Zoey declined that he was her boyfriend whenever she was asked.
Aah Mark. He's gorgeous! I wonder where he will take me tomorrow. Thought Zoey.
'Hello! Anyone in there?' inquired Elliot as he snapped his fingers in front of Zoey's face.
'Grr! How many times do I have to tell you? He is not my boyfriend!'
'Yeah yeah, sure he isn't, now get to work!' answered Elliot, bored.
'Argh!' screamed Zoey in frustration.
She was walking into the toilets to change, when as usual, clumsy Bridget smashed a plate.
'Oops! Sorry.' pleaded a very red Bridget.
Elliot sighed.
'It's okay, but try and be a bit more careful next time.' he said.
Zoey laughed and was about to go into the toilets, when suddenly, she felt a cold hand grip her shoulder. She froze immediately. She was too scared to look back as it squeezed her shoulder.
'Aaaah!'
Zoey let out a bloodcurdling scream.
The café turned silent.
Not a single thing stirred…
Ok I have written and typed up the next chapter, but I am not going to post it until I get a couple more reviews. Why? Because I am evil like that! Hehe…
At the moment, I only have rough idea where this story is heading, as I have not planned it as I hate planning things. I'm just coming up with ideas as I go along…y'know? That is why my summary is so rubbish, but please, don't be put off by my rubbish summary. I am going away today and won't be back until Monday, so please leave me some nice reviews/messages for then. Even if it's just to give me some things to improve on, or to correct a mistake, please leave me a review! I have no idea whether this is any good as I have not shown it to anyone before, so…at least TRY to enjoy it even if it's rubbish. That is all, thanks, Pheobe xoxox