So I'm re writing this because I saw so many errors in my writing and now here is chapter 1 of City of the Dead
November 1 2012
An innocent man was walking, well speed walking, down the alley way already late for dinner; but he never noticed a dark figure silently following him ever since he left his office
He was just about to turn the corner when …
"BAM!"
The man slowly turned around to see where the noise came from, seeing that there was a man in a lab coat holding a pistol there, he figured out that that the source of the noise was the pistol sense it was still emitting low smoke from the nuzzle
"Hello There" The unknown man said
"WH-What do you want?" The, now terrified, man fearfully asked
"Well you see I need someone to experiment on and well … I chose you the unknown man said while wearing a very an awry smile
"What?" The man asked already having tears at the brim of his eyes
"You heard me, don't worry after were finished you won't feel a thing well of course that's because your dead"
The man's eyes became as wide as a saucer before preparing to run out of the alley but before he even begun to run…
"BAM!"
"Move and I'll shoot you then torture you painfully before I start my project on you" The still unknown man threatened while slowly walking towards the now sobbing man
"Please, Please I'll give you money, a house, anything please don't kill me! I have a family... Please" The man, now fully sobbing, begged
The unknown man did not response but he did give another demonical laugh before grabbing a small syringe full of unidentified liquid from his left pocket then directly injecting it to his left arm
"Ahhhhhhhhhh!"
"Now let the transformation begin" The unknown man said while walking away , laughing demonically
1 Week later (November 8 2012) in an unknown warehouse in Los Angeles
"In other reports a large population of people are easily being killed by some unknown creature and when they are taken to a Funeral Home the next day their bodies seem to vanish. Police Officials and Investigators are still trying to conduct a proper explanation for this occurrence. And in other news Brad Leons, CEO of Presley Corporation, is still missing. Reports say that he was missing since November 1. Police investigators are having suspicions that he is dead but since he's body is still missing and the investigators don't have any suspects the police's suspicions cannot be claimed as an official report and other investigators hypothesize that this two occurrence are connected but still they have no evidence to support that hypothesis. And this is Ted Garcia reporting live for channel 12"
"Good, my plan is ready for action"