Well, i'm sure that my one fan out there will be happy to see this, my latest work. I'm quite happy with it, my-self, but please, any coments are welcome. This isa(nother) poem from Kurama's point of veiw, about life, abouthimself and includesallusions that are meant to be toward hiei. Though, really, they're vague enough to be applied to just aboutanyone. Romantic angst, beware!

Enjoy:

Simplicity out of Reach

What is this feeling,

Welling up inside

It started one day

When I saw the sun

Hit you in such a way, that it caught my eye

And I looked

As if for the first time

At your face

At your eyes

And it started then

I started noticing things about you

All over again

But it was different this time

I cherished the things I was coming to see

Even though most of them I'd seen before

I just hadn't noticed them the way I do now

I don't know what to do with this feeling

It makes me want to do something, something unthinkable

Something I hardly understand

Something you could never fathom

Why do I feel the way I do?

Is this a punishment for a past life?

I'm not the same person I was then

I'm not even sure what person I am now

Why I'm I being bombarded with these feelings

At this most awkward time

This in-between

This place in life where I'm still figuring out who I am

I don't need the distraction of trying to figure you out as well

I didn't want this

How do I make it go away,

Without making you disappear?

Are these just the desperate thoughts of the unrequited?

Have I stooped so low as to write such an epithet?

Why did the sun have to be out that day?

I knew I always preferred the rain for a reason

It just makes life

Simple

This is all I really could hope for right now, simplicity

For anything else is out of reach…

Is it sad that this is one of my best works, and that is was done at midnight in less then 15 minutes? Does that truelly tell me that I suck? or do i have some sort of muse that doesn't like to show up till midnight? Review on your opinions, and let me know of any major errors, i'm frankly to tired to see them anymore.