So guys, This is my first fanfiction ever. I'll appreciate if you guys help me out. Point out what's wrong if you don't like the story, so I can hopefully work on making it better and more enjoyable, and if you like let me know too, that will get me the confidence to continue with this story and know that there's people enjoying this, wich what I want all along. Also, please don't be harsh on me
English is not even my native language, so excuse me if you see any gramar error, or any other type of mistakes, just let me know and I'll try to improve myself.
Desclaimer : I don't own naruto or any form of it... Because if I did i wouldn't be in this website *sigh sadly*
Anyway.
1-Prologue :
The war was over.
They had lost.
This loss was impossible to bear. This was no ordinary war, this defeat meant the end of the world. Despite all their efforts to prevent this pathetically pitiful ending, they have failed to save millions of people, people that counted on them. They were the last hope, but they couldn't pull through it. If they couldn't do it than no one could. With everyone else exept for their sensei trapped in the eternal tsukiyomi, they were done for. It was at the moment that they were imprisoned in this dimension that the realisation hit them. Kaguya won and they had lost.
Now, they couldn't do anything but wait for their death as it approched them every second.
"-Dammit !There must be a way out of here. " He heard his pink haired temmate curse, she was pacing all over the place, examining every inch of the vast and semmingly endless land. He never saw the kunoichi this agitated, but frankly, he was just as anxious and uneasy as she was. He grunted in frustration, mimicking his friend actions.
"-We can't give up just yet. " He drawled as both of his teammates dropped their desprate search for a way out and sat on the ground. The uchiha looked at him panting heavily, his eyes returning to their original black color. He was clearly exaushted, they had been trying to come out of here for hours to no avail. Releasing his gaze from the blonde, he cocked his head backwards and stared into nothingness.
He said in a scurvy and low voice, not bothering to hide his sorrow. "- It's over naruto. This probably the end of the line for us. We tried everything we could , from using ninjutsu to scabbing fuinjutsu, even your hiraishin didn't work. " Naruto eyes widened hearing these words, he didn't think his black haired friend would give up.
Sakura lowered her head sadly before inclining it toward the blond. "- He's right, you know. We failed naruto. This is the end. " She pointed out, clutching to her legs, as if looking for comfort.
"- No, no, no. " He shook his head -" It's not over ! We can find a way. " The blond jinchiruki insisted, looking hopefully between his two teammates. He wished for some reasurance, he wished they'll say they are just kidding and that they would yell at him because he didn't find the way out and that it was the most obvious thing in the world. He hoped that they were just acting and trying to prove him how stupid he is. But he knew it was impossible, they were just as clueless as he is.
"- Naruto ! Please ! Just … Just sit down and calm down. This is not helping. Please ! " Sakura begged. He sighed, benting to the ground, settling down next to his two teammates, as they sat back to back.
"- You know, I'm glad I'm dying next to you two. " Mumbled Sasuke, clearly forcing the words out. Upon realising what he just said, he corrected : "- I mean, even if we're gonna die, I'm glad i'm with you .." He felt the urge to declare his feelings, he loked at his teamates with the smallest hint of smile. The two other ninjas smiled at him warmly but remained silent.
"I never thought it would end up like this.I still didn't achieve my dream. " Despite their situation, his tone was playful and mocking. Sasuke smirked as he faced the blonde.
"- Well, you're gonna achieve one of your dreams soon enough." He said, eyeing the blond mockingly. A look of realisation downed on sakura's face as she chuckled softly, remembering their genins days.
"- Yeah, I thought you wanted to be 'killed in action' " She said, pulling her knees up, resting her chin on them, shooting a playful look toward naruto. The blonde rolled his eyes but couldn't help the smirk from looming into his face. "-Well, I kinda thought it was cool back then and i didn't know what it actually meant. Besides, My name won't even make it into the memorial stone now. " He pulled his tongue out in a childlike manner, he shifted slightly, trying to adjust his body into a more comfortable position, moving this way and that way. Both ninjas looked at him clearly amused as they drifted into silence.
T.H.E. B.U.T.T.E.R. F.L.Y. E.F.F.E.C.T
He never believed in time travel before , he always thought it was impossible and beyond human reach, he never actually gave it a thought, never paid attention to this subject before, considering as a waste of time and squandering of efforts . Everyone knew it was a hard topic and there was no evidence that time travel existed. And all that made him really confused and afraid at the same time, what if this didn't go quite as planned, mainly because what they're gonna do was never tried before. It was a gamble, a risk they had to take or lose evrything including their lives, their last resort was to change the curse of actions. Hopefully, it would go as planned.
Hearing kurama description he drew the seal on the ground, following every single detail precisely. He couldn't afford to mess anything up. A small stumble could make a big change. The blond couldn't help but feel impressed by the fox proposition, the proud demon refused to die like this. 'This makes us look pitiful, and pity is not what we want. Especially you, kit. You wanted respect all your life. We won't die and let kaguya room free.' He said ... it actually came out of nowhere. One moment the kitsune was silent and the other he wouldn't shut his mouth about his pride and his position among the tailed beasts that it made him suffer from a headache . Naruto merely had to sweet-talk the nine-tailed beast into sharing his plan, and even that wasn't easy.
After several minutes of discussing with his tenant, naruto realised that the seal that they were drawing was developed by the sage of the six paths, and the only way to make it work is to have some of the sage chakra, meaning that it was only designed to work for the old man and the old man alone, but since he and sasuke were just given that same exact chakra previously made it possible for them to perform it. Naruto was surprised by the kyuubi memory giving the fact that this jutsu was a dead technique that was not performed by anyone even the sage. That was probably why, kurama stayed silent for several hours before deciding to open his mouth. The fact that they were the first ones to perform the jutsu, made him a lot more uncomfortable, but he had to do it.
He ignored his two teammates who were peering at him, inquiring about what he was doing, in favor of completting this complex seal . They will find out soon enough.
Whatever the dobe was doing, They knew deep down that it's gonna worth the wait.
"-Time travel". Demanded Sakura, surprised about the blond earlier declaration.
She stared at him like he grew a second head. "- You know that's not gonna work, Right ? ". She added before sighing, and here she thought the blonde would come out with something useful. Sasuke however, glanced at his teammate, clearly interested as he montioned for naruto to continue.
The blond expained the plan he came out along with kurama, and told them about the seal and the way to activate the jutsu, the two other ninjas were amased, this might actuallly work, but there was still some risks.
"-Are you sure this is going to work".
"- That's what we're gonna find out now" He replied montioning for them to stand besides him in the middle of the seal. Fortunatly, the seal allowed an extra person to travel along with the user, wich were obviously naruto and sasuke since they had the sage chakra. "- Let's do this guys" Shouted naruto as an orange chakra engulved his body. They hold their hands together and molded their chakra into the seal, wich needed a huge amount to work..
So, I read the chapter again and made sure to correct any mistake I came across. Sorry for those stupid mistakes and I'll make sure to avoid those in the future. And please, if there's anything wrong with the story, please point itout. It sure would help me a lot !