I ran as fast as I could down the street to my friend Lilly's house. I borrowed her copy of Kingdom Hearts ll but, I was supposed to give it to her before she moves to Hawaii for a year.

I run up to the apartment building her and her family live in. I press the buzzer for her apartment.

*Buzz*

I open the door and run in. I run to the elevator and hit the up button.

"Come on Come on." I look up at what floor the elevators on. "The 9th floor? That'll take forever! I've got to get the game back or face Lilly's wraith." I bolt for the stairs.

Round and round I go up the stairs till I get to the 5th floor. I run to the end of the hallway and take a right then run up to the 3rd room on the left. I knock.

"Lilly?" No answer. "Lilly I have your Kingdom Hearts Game." Still no answer. I try the door knob. "Unlocked?" I push open the door. "Lilly? Mr. or Mrs. Stevenson?" I walk into the apartment. I walk down a hall into Lilly's room. "What the?"

I couldn't believe my eyes. Right in front of the doorway inside Lilly's room was a black and purple swirling vortex of sorts. I put her copy of the game down on the floor.

"What is this thing?"

"You're Destiny."

"Huh!" Before I can turn around to face the voice I'm pushed forward.

I'm suddenly on the ground somewhere.

"What?" I sit up and look around. Black, that's all I saw. I try to open my eyes, but realize that they are open. 'This is too weird, I can't see' suddenly the floor lights up bright white. "Ahh!"I cover my eyes. I uncover them when the light dims. I look down around me and see a round stain-glass floor with a swirling design. I stand up but the floor breaks under me and suddenly I'm falling back. I flip in the air so I'm falling face first.

Below me all I see is nothing but darkness.

Then in the center of that darkness.

A small light.

Getting brighter and brighter.

Until it consumes me.

"-ey."

'Ow, I think I hit my head.'

"Hey."

'I think I hear someone.'

"Hey!" I snap my eyes open and find myself looking into a pair of golden hazel eyes. "Hey, are you alright?" I look to the left of those eyes to see a pair of green eyes.

"Yeah, you just fell out of nowhere. It looked like you landed on your head." I look back to the right of the Hazel eyes to a pair of brown eyes.

"Who are you guys?" They stand up and I sit up. My eyes widen.

"I'm Hayner, this is Pence and Olette." The Hazel eyed boy says gesturing to Green eyed girl then brown eyed boy.

'They look just like Hayner, Pence and Olette from Kingdom Hearts 2. Are they cosplayers but wait they said their names are Hayner Pence and Olette.'

"Where am I?"

"I think she hit her head harder than we thought." Pence says.

"You're in Twilight Town."

"T-TwlightTown."

"You don't even remember where you live."

"Actually now that I look at you, I've never seen you before. Are you new here?"

"Uh, Yeah."

"What's your name?"

"Sophie."

"Ok Sophie, what was the last thing you remember?"

"Falling."

"Here?"

"No, I was surrounded in darkness then fell into a light."

"Darkness?"

"A light?"

"hmm…"

"oh! Hayner look at the time!" Olette says pointing to a clock in the window of a nearby shop.

"Oh, crap. We gotta go. We'll send our friend Roxas to come get you. Stay here!" The three ran away.

'Now what?' I look around.

'I guess I am in the Twilight town from the game and if Roxas is here that means this is the virtual one. I have to remember that incase I go to the real Twilight Town I don't want to freak out Hayner, Pence and Olette.' I look and see the hole in the wall that leads to the forest by the old mansion.

'A quick look won't hurt, I'll come right back.'

I run over to the hole in the wall.

'I hope Roxas takes his time.'

I go into the forest and look around.

"Wow, this is unreal." I hear a shuffling to my right and snap my head in the sounds direction. I see figure in a black cloak.

'The Organization!'

"Hey!"

'Stupid! Why did I call out to them?' They look back at me then open a portal.

"Wait! Axel!"

'Oh now you've done it! What if it's not Axel, What if It's Xemnas, Oh God!' They stop and look back. They walk over. He takes his hood off and I see that it is Axel.

'Thank heavens.'

"How do you know my name?"

"Um… I dunno."

"You had to know somehow. Who do you work for?"

"I work for nobody." 'Oh wait' "I mean no one."

"Why did you correct yourself?"

"Um… I dunno?"

"What's your name?"

"Sophie." He froze and looked me up and down, stopping to study my face.

'Why is he looking at me like that?' He muttered something under his breath.

"What?"

"Nothing. Do you know of Organization Xlll?" I nod.

"Name all the members."

"Why?"

"Just name them."

"ok, Xemnas, Xigbar, Xaldin, Vexen, Lexaeus, Zexion, SaÏx, You; Axel, Demyx, Luxord, Marluxia, Larxene, and Roxas, although Roxas lost his memories and is living in this fake Twilight Town."

"How could you know that, you can't really be…" He trailed off.

"What are you talking about?"

"Nothing." He mumbles, putting his hand on his chin in deep thought.

"ok, um, I'm gunna go explore the old mansion up ahead…um bye." I start to walk towards the mansion when he snaps out of his daze.

"oh, hey wait!" I stop and look back at him. "Let me go with you. It's dangerous to go alone."

"Ok."

We walk out of the woods and approach the gate.

"Sophie!"

"Roxas?" Axel and I look back.

"Yeah, I was supposed to stay put and wait until he came to get me." Roxas runs out of the woods and sees us.

"Sophie?" I nod. "Get away from him! He's bad news!" I look up at Axel and snicker quietly.

"She's going into the Mansion with me." He says taking my arm and pulling me toward the mansion gates.

"No, she's coming with me; I won't let you harm her!" Roxas said running up and grabbing my other arm. They both started pulling.

"Hey you're gunna rip my arms off if you keep doing that!" I hear the sound of a portal opening.

"Why don't you let her chose who she wants to go with?" My arms are suddenly pulled out of Roxas and Axel's hands and I'm pulled back against someone's chest. They hold my arms by my sides. I look up at the guy holding me. I'm close enough to where I can just see his face through the darkness of his hood.

'OMG it's Zexion.' Then the realization hit me.

'Zexion's holding me.' I blush slightly. He looks into my eyes curiously probably wondering why I was blushing.

"If you two are done staring at each other could we move on?" Axel says getting impatient. Zexion nods. He leans down to whisper in my ear.

"Go, leave with Roxas. We'll meet again soon." I nod and he lets go of me. I run over to Roxas. Axel and Zexion Leave through a portal.

"Are you ok?" Roxas asks. I nod.

"I'm fine."

"Didn't Hayner tell you to stay where you were? What if that guy took you somewhere?"

"I'm sorry."

"I guess it's ok, nothing happened. Let's go meet up with Hayner, Pence and Olette." I nod and we walk towards the Usual Spot.

"You know as well as I do we need her, Zexion."

"For what Axel?"

"Listen you know how Xemnas was talking about a 15th member?"

"Yes."

"Well he thinks it's her and he also thinks she can get us more hearts"

"Will she get hurt?"

"How should I know? Why do you care about what happens to her?"

"I don't."

"You know you can't like her. You don't have the heart for it. None of us do."

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