Hello people this is my first fanfic and I really hope you enjoy it.
Feel free to give me any writing tips, but nothing mean ok thx.
Let me know if you guys like the first chapter so I know to continue or not.
Ok on to the story
Chapter 1
"Quiet night"
It was a quiet night in the land of Ooo; Finn and Jake were fast asleep inside their tree fort after a long day of helping Princess Bubblegum with various tasks that needed to be done in the candy kingdom.
It was quiet; Finn and Jake were in deep sleep when all of a sudden both of them were woken up by a loud crash of thunder and a bright flash of lightning.
Finn: what the huh? Are we being attacked!
Finn jumped out of bed sword in hand ready to fight.
Jake: Naw dude calm down its just a storm…I think…
Finn let out a sigh and lowered his sword calming himself down.
Jake stretched out of his drawer- bed towards the window to take a look at what he thought was just a storm. But to his shock and amazement he saw an epic battle unfolding in the sky!
Jake: oh my gloob! Finn you've got to see this!
Finn: ok man I'm coming.
Finn walked towards Jake and the window, he stood next to Jake and his jaw dropped at what he saw.
Finn: whoa O_O!
They both saw what looked to be a lightning wizard battling a dark figure in the air.
Both of the hero's couldn't make out who or what was attacking the wizard, they could only see the dark figures silhouette as it dodged the none stop lightning blast coming from the wizards hands.
Wizard: GET AWAY FROM ME!
The wizard yelled as he fired more lightning bolts at the figure.
Dark figure: GIVE IT BACK!
The figure dodged one more blast and swooped in for the kill.
Wielding a long curvy object the figure swung it at the wizards head, but the wizard was fast and dodged the incoming attack, the wizard follow up the dodge with a huge double handed lightning counter attack and hit the dark figure square in the chest sending he/she to the ground with incredible force next to Finn and Jakes house.
The wizard started to laugh manically "HAHAHA! you'll never get it back hahahaha!"
The wizard flew off into the distant darkness of the sky.
Finn and Jake turned and looked at each other shocked at what the just saw. Jake quickly snapped out of it.
Jake: well that was cool **yawn** back to bed =_=
Finn looked at Jake with even more shock than before.
Finn: WHAT! Dude we've got to help that guy outside! He's totally messed up!
Jake looked at Finn, half asleep, rubbing his eyes.
Jake: yeah, but we don't even know he or she is evil or not, they'll probably try to kill both of us if we go out there.
Finn shook his shocked face off and glared at the floor with his hand to his chin thinking of how the person outside couldn't be evil, so he can convince Jake to go outside too.
Finn: yeah, but he yelled at the wizard to "GIVE IT BACK!" right before he blasted him.
Maybe the wizard stole something from that guy and he was just trying to get it back.
Jake let out a long sigh and looked at Finn with a tired expression on his face.
Jake: alright man, lets go see…..
Finn: algebriac!
Finn grabbed his sword and some type of first aid thing he found and started climbing down the ladder that led up to their room. As he was doing this Jake developed a worried yet proud look on his face.
Jake was worried.
He didn't want his lil bro to die, but he also didn't want to get in the way of how Finn was.
A good hearted, brave, awesome hero.
So Jake always let Finn do his "hero thang" and always backed him up, even through the toughest situations.
Finn: Jake, you ok…
Jake shook the "phased out" look off his face and looked back at Finn.
Jake: yeah man I'm fine let's go.
End of chapter 1
I really really hope yall like this, please review and let me know of any mistakes I made.
I'm always up for a lil constructive criticism lol.
Well till next time… cya ;p