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Chapter 1
I walked down the dark streets, silently cursing myself for saying yes to taking the late shift tonight. The night was cold and thick clouds blanketed the moon as my high heels clicked against the deserted street.
I decided to take the short cut through the forest, cold and sore, to my trailer that laid on the other side of the dense woods. I lived in this town for years, spending nearly all my free time exploring these woods, so I knew them by heart. Well…at least this small portion of the woods. Nearer to the mountains it's unknown territory.
My heels caught on the branches and roots on the ground, but I trudged on, wishing for a long hot shower and a cup of hot chocolate. As I was imagining this, a twig snapped from behind me, causing me to spin around. Before I could get a proper look, someone jumped on me, knocking me to the ground. As I struggled to wiggle out from under whoever it was, someone grabbed my neck with cool hands, and dug something sharp and long into the side of my neck.
I couldn't help the scream that echoed through the night, pain sharp and icy, cut through the numb my body took on after being out in the cold. It was like a painful splash of water when you are sleeping. I don't remember what happened after that. I just remembered a blur of black, some yells and shouts, and what I think were growls, followed by the weight being pulled from my body and the spikes out of my neck. I screamed as they left, but I was too far into the murky water to really understand what was happening.
Then, a new pain started in my neck and spread threw my body. It brought me back to my senses only to feel as if I was being burned alive from the inside out. It was the most painful thing I have ever experienced before.
I screamed till I went horse, and finally lost unconsciousness. The last thing I remember was someone picking me up and carrying me away.
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