NeSu-chan:Hey everyone!!!I decided to do this story when I was looking for Naruto/Fullmetal Alchemist stories and I found very few that strike my interest so I had enough and decided to do things for my self-satisfaction and everyone else who has the same issue.
Now the first chapter is going to be short for 3 reasons:
1. I have to study so I'm basically writing this during my break time.
2. I can't finish this story tonight cause the Cowboys(a football team) is going to play in the playoffs so I DON'T want to miss it.
3. And finally we have a water leak so I'm right now dehydrated so I can't write as long without my water!!Trust me when I say I need my water to write!!:D
This story has many pairings so here there are(in no order)Main:Nejiten, Sasusaku, Naruhina, Shikaino, Edwin, and Royriza.
Minor:Many of them...
This story was also supported by the poll on my profile(you can still vote cause I still need ideas.)So I want to thank the people who voted, supported me and also read and reviewed my stories!!I'm so touched**HUGS**
And I also made a community for Nejiten lovers so when you have time please check that out and my other stories!!Thanks!!:D
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Now we will hear the disclaimer from both main characters Naruto and Edward!!**YAY!!**
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Ed:I swear to god woman why did you drag me over here?!
Naruto:Yeah what did we ever do to you?!!
NeSu-chan:Well first we need both main characters to start the story and if you haven't notice you guys have similarities so it goes together!!
Ed&Naruto:What similarities?
NeSu-chan:.....really you don't know?.....your both short and hot-headed.
Ed&Naruto:.......CRASH!!!!
NeSu-chan:Crap!!I forgot!!**Hides behind the couch with my laptop and Ed and Naruto cursing in the background**
Ed:WHO ARE YOU CALLING A SHORT BEAN SPOUT THAT CAN BARELY BE SEEN WITH A MICROSCOPE!!!!WHEN I FIND THAT WOMEN I'M GOING TO-!!
Naruto:YEAH ALL THINGS HE SAID AND I'M NOT A RAMEN-OBSESSED FREAK!!
NeSu-chan:I didn't say any of that!!And could you two CALM DOWN NOW?!!**Hits them with a huge bag of skittles.**
Ed&Naruto:Ouch!!That hurt.
NeSu-chan:Get over it and hurry up and say the disclaimer!!I want to start the story!!**Gives them the evil eye**
Ed:Damn woman...NeSu-chan doesn't own me or the story Fullmetal Alchemist even if she wanted to...
Naruto:Right!!She also doesn't own me or the Naruto story!!BELIEVE IT!!!....
Ed&Naruto:She only owns the plot and OCC characters.
NeSu-chan:There!!It wasn't that hard was it?**Smiles**
And also on the side note:
All the genin in Naruto are 12(expect Team Gai which are 13) and it starts just before the Chunin Exams.
And Ed and Winry are both 15 with Al as 14 (Roy, Riza and Maes are 25).
I will answer any question you have with the plot cause it might be confusing to some people so just review and I'll answer like a good girl I should be!! :)
Ed:Right you a good girl...AHHHHH!!!LET ME GO!!
NeSu-chan:**Holds Ed by the hoodie of his jacket** You know being tall has benefits, but of course you wouldn't know would you Ed-chan!!
Ed:Did you just call me short?!!
NeSu-chan:While I torture Ed-chan here I hope you enjoy the story and we'll be back!!**Drags Ed to his hell**
Ed:Damn it!!NOOOO!!!
"Speaking"
Thoughts
Inner Speaking or Titles
Chapter 1: The Fallen
Teachings That Do Not Speak Of Pain Have No Meaning...
...Because Humankind Cannot Gain Anything Without First Giving Something In Return.
-The first page and first volume of Fullmetal Alchemist.
In Amestris, Resembool...
"We finally did it, didn't we?"Alphonse Elric said while standing beside the transformation circle next to his brother Edward Elric another wise known as the Fullmetal Alchemist. After years of searching for the Philosopher's Stone they had it their very hands. After finding the stone they went back the Resembool and told Winry Rockbell about their finding. She decided to watch them preform the transmutation and she also provided the basement and supplies for it even. They were about to begin and both Al and Ed were twitching with excitement but both knew something could go wrong.
"Yeah we found it."Ed said while looking at the circle with the stone in the middle. They all knew what the ingredient was to make the stone but they had a chance to get their bodies back and they were going to take it.
"Are you guys sure this is what you want to do? What if something happens again?"Winry said standing behind the brothers looking at them with a worried expression.
"Your just a worry-wart Winry. We have the stone so nothing should by paid for doing a transmutation."Ed said with a cheeky grin.
"Brother's right, Winry. Just stand back and watch."
"Yeah. Just sip some tea or something and enjoy the show."
With that they slap their hands together looking like they were praying and slapped them both to the ground. The circle lit up with a sunlight blinding color lighting up the room. There was a smoothing sound coming from it that sounded so peaceful and pleasing that it almost sounded like a lullaby. The wind picked up sweeping everything in the dusty room. Ed felt a bit of dust in his nose and sneezed.
"Achoo!!"While he sneezed he slide his hands away from the circle. He realized his mistake and quickly put in his hands back in place.
But it was too late.
The once radiate light turn into a grim darkness. There was a screeching sound that shock their ears senseless. And there was lightning bolts shooting all around the room with anything that hit it disappears. Ed had a sick feeling that if they get hit they were so dead.
"Al, Winry! Let's get out of here!"Ed screamed while facing his brother and child-friend.
"But, Broth-AHHH!!!"
Al was hit be the lightning and disappeared from this world..
"AL!!!!!!"
"Ed we need to get out of her-EKKKKKK!!!!!"
"Winry!!!!"
They both were gone. His two important people in this world were gone. They were the only ones that can save him from ending his life. And now that they were both gone. He would go with them.
"Damn it!!It's my fault!!NOT THEIRS!!!TAKE MY FUCKING LIFE!!!!"
On cue a lightning bolt hit him and he fell into the black abyss.
Amestris, Central City Headquarters...
"I'm going to KILL this paperwork!!"Colonel Roy Mustang screamed from his office for the 34th time today. But, his whining was called off when a gunshot ringed and he stood still and silent just like his Lieutenant Colonel Riza Hawkeye wants him to be.
"Sir, I would appreciate if you would lower your voice a bit. We don't want the higher ups hearing you signing your paperwork late like always."She said while pointing her gun between his eyes warning him to get to work.
"Yes ma'am!"he said and started to scribbling his paper rapidly.
"Hahaha!Well I guess Roy is following orders from his babysitter again!"Maes Hughes said while coming in and walking towards the Colonel's desk. But he was stopped halfway when a cool barrel gun point to the side of his head.
"I suggest you leave, Mr. Hughes. I don't want the Colonel to get distracted...again."
"Ah, come on Riza. I just wanted to show something to you two, but if your going to be like that then I guess I won't tell!"he pouted and looking away from the two officers.
"*Sigh*, Alright what is it?"Colonel Mustang said while looking away from his paperwork.
"I got a new picture of my baby girl!!"he said while shoving the picture in front of Roy's face.
"Hughes, I have paperwork to do so would you leave now?!!"Roy said getting irritated and was about to hit him when a small voice ringed across the room.
"Oh. Haven't finished you paperwork yet, Colonel? Well I guess we can do it when your gone."
The officers turned to face the door to find Selim Bradley otherwise known as Pride leaning on the door frame and smirking.
"How did you get in here?"Riza said while pointing her gun at the boy.
"Well my father does work here."
"What do you want?"Roy said while putting on his gloves.
"I'm just the messenger. And, the message is that the Fullmetal Alchemist, his brother, and childhood-friend are not in this world anymore."
"What do you mean by that?!!"Roy said getting very angry and ready to shoot him with his flames.
"You'll see NOW."Pride said while his darkness wrapped themselves around the officers and surrounding them with ever lasting darkness.
Naruto World, Kohona
"Crap!We'll get him next time!!Believe it!!"Naruto shouted with the rest of team 9 behind him looking equally determined.
"Next time we will see what's behind that ma-!!Agh!!!!!HELP ME!!!"
Something or someone fell from the sky and landed on top of Naruto suffocating him. Sakura and Sasuke helped him out and looked and the fallen people.
"Who are they?"
What may seem good, can never truly be good.
-quote by:NeSu-chan
NeSu-chan:Well like it? I hope you did. I know it's kinda short and the endings confusing but all of that will be explained in the next chapter.
Naruto:Yeah and why did you have to crush me?!Did I die?
NeSu-chan:If you were died then you won't be here would you?
Naruto:...Oh! Then where's Ed?
NeSu-chan:....Oops....a well he's in a good place(he's not died just sleeping).
Naruto:NeSu-chan!You can't kill characters the creator's need them to finish their stories!!
NeSu-chan:He's not died just asleep.
Ed:Ha!Asleep my ass!!You put me unconscious!!
NeSu-chan:Ed's just lying. Anyway I would like everyone to review please and if you don't I'm going to have to torture these two some more.
Ed:Listen to me people!!PLEASE review or anything to make this women happy and if you don't I'll force you to drink milk!!!
Naruto:Yeah and I'll force you to watch my sexy-justu!!
Ed&Naruto:So please review!!!My life is in your hands!!!
NeSu-chan:If you want any characters from either story to be in the next intro please ask with the review(or PM me) and see you soon!!
^^NeSu-chan^^