Prologue
The rain poured in sheets, thunder flashed across the sky. Yet there a girl stood, on the edge of a cliff.
Water crashed against the cliff, causing birds to fly up in a panic. The waves receded.
A bubble rose, and the girl moved her hand, causing the water to waver in the air. Still following her hand, the bubble fell into the deep abyss of the dark sea.
A comforting hand slid onto the girl's shoulder. She turned, tears streaming down her face. No words could describe the intensity of the feelings the two felt. No one could heal the pain but the other. Yet, staring at each other in the clearing made everything so much more painful.
The girl ripped her arm away and jumped.
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