Okay, Before you read this and have any suspicions... This was Adopted by me, This was the work of StarFall78 but she was having writers block, and had a lack of inspiration. Well I'm in the same shoes as you are girl, But I respect your decision. Anyway, The first 2 chapters were created by her before she set the fic up for adoption. Without further ado, I do encourage you to enjoy the first Chapter...
Waking up in a shelter cage is bad. But waking up every day in an trash can is worse. Yep that's me. May the Eevee, please let me make your stay pleasant. Not really. I don't know you so I hate you. Oh what's that? You want to hear my story? To bad!... Ugh fine!
Chapter 1: Bitter
The cold floor of my crate greets me along with the sound of stale berries being poured into my bowl as I wake up. I growl and sit up, It's the same thing every day. Wake up, eat, be cute, hope to be adopted, eat, sleep, repeat.
I've been doing this most of my life. I was born to a trainer and loved him very much, but I wasn't strong enough and was released at a month old. I lived in the city after that, then some -ahem- house pet, got annoyed with me hanging around and told his "master".
Next thing I know I'm being shipped off to an adoption center. In a Pokemon center of all places! Yep, I'm in the place where People go Pokemon shopping! They always pick the cute ones! Like that Purlion or-or that Pidove! But me!? Noooooo! I never get chosen.
So I sit here, day in day out, curled up in a ball at the back of my cage. Where no one can see m-my tears.
Ah, what am I doing?! I've been abandoned. I've been spit on. I've been kicked. I've Been Beaten! I'VE BEEN SHUNED! I'VE BEEN LEFT BEHIND BY THE ONLY ONES WHO MIGHT CARE ABOUT ME!
I have no one who will ever love me, and that's made me bitter.
I'm going to post everything about this fic before I adopted it here:
5 Reviews-
1 & 2 ( Mr. Sally ) - 1- "I'm so sad look at all of my angst! I hate everyone baaaaaaaaaaaaaw!" 2- Instead of trying to pump out a bunch of short chapters as quick as you can you should try taking your time and putting more effort and content into each chapter. Also, you might want to look into proper writing grammar and etiquette. Sorry if my first review came of as hostile or mean-spirited, I just like making fun of characters sometimes. Especially if they're whiny or angsty.
3 ( Liliana Dragonshard ) - You are good at this. Keep it up!
4 & 5 ( silva fox14) - 4- Hey great chapter keep it up I like the point of view from which this is written it is bound to lead to some interesting twists.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter! 5- Well this is disappointing...
There we're 3 chapters, 2 actual Chapters then the Adoption notice.
It was 838 words.
2 favorites and 3 follows.
Published July 23rd and Last Updated September 27th.
Adopted September 28th.
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This is my tribute to the original.