Hello there. I took this a lot more seriously then I did before. Not the story itself, it's still the silly fluffy love story from before, but the way it was written.
Thanks!
Prologue
The pair watched from a dark corner of the alleyway.
"Are you sure she is the right one?" whispered the woman.
"Yes." There was no doubt in his voice.
She couldn't be so sure. "But we can't know for-"
"Do you trust me?"
She nodded firmly. "Of course."
"Then she is the right one," the man muttered quietly. "A girl with fire in her eyes..." Even from here he could see the red glow of her irises.
The girl in question had a woman pressed up against the wall. They could hear her whispering in the whimpering female's ear, telling her to calm down. That everything would be alright. Moving from her ear to her lips, she seemed to inhale. Her victim fell to the ground, dead.
As the girl turned to leave, she caught sight of the figures crouching in the shadows. As the pair stepped out of their hiding place, she dropped the glamour off the scabbard hanging loosely around her waist.
"Who's there?" Her hair was living fire, her sword faintly glowing green as she gripped its hilt.
"I mean you no harm," the man said calmly. "I simply had a question for you."
She glared at the two of them, hoping her confusion wasn't showing. Didn't they see her kill that woman? Still prepared to fight, she said sternly, "Ask, then."
The man smirked. "How do you feel about a perfect world?"