Hey, all! Just a quick note about Rebecca Joins the Crew. I'm going through and editing, adding stuff, a nd maturing the story. It needs some major work before I continue. To keep this a real chapter, and not an evil author's note Gasp Here's a quick little preview of my revamp work.
She could see her father turn his head to smile at her. Then.. a blaring horn, a crash. Fear, confusion. Flashing lights. The fearful smell of the hospital.A father not responding. People in white rushing around. Fear. Confusion. Where's Daddy? Where's Mama? I want my mama! No one turns. Cries gounnoticed. Then..
The child's mother rushs in the Emergency Room. "Mama! Mama!"a little girl with bouncing curls and periwinkle eyes runs towards the woman. She has a bandage covering her forhead and part of her eye."Mam! I got an owie! I need my owie kiss for it to be better. I tried to give Daddy one, but he still hasn't waked up. What's happpening? Where's Annie?" The mother smiles at her daughter. "Annie's in the lavatory, sweetheart. Lovey, there's someth-" "Mrs. Night, I presume?" The tired woman turns.
Yeah, I know it's short, but the chapters to come will honestly be worth reading. I hope.