I wanna try out this one. I have got the basic plot complete. Now it will be the way I write it out and present it.
First of all, ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE.
My first language is chinese, and I study English. That's why my English is very very very poor. So please, ignore any grammar mistakes and such, alright?
Secondly, dun like it? Dun read it. Dun give me rude comments and break my heart
So now, let's proceed. Fufu…
"I love you Neji"
"Well, I don't."
OH MAN! Why did I even say that to him? Thought Tenten. As tears flowed from her eyes, she hugged her teddy tight to her chest and smiled bitterly.
"Geez, you suck girl! Confess and then? Got dumped instantly, how embarrassing."
She tried to make herself laugh, or at least smile and stop crying. Oh come on, it's just Neji; it's his loss for rejecting me. I can definitely find a better one! Definitely! Just go to sleep and forget about him tomorrow…
"Sounds easy, but can you?"
Tenten sat up immediately, grabbing a kunai from her bedside desk, she yelled "Who's that?"
"Before you ask a question, answer mine first. Can you really forget Hyuuga Neji?"
"Of-of course! It's just him! Now that I have answered you question, tell me! Who are you?"
Tenten felt a sharp claw pressing against her back. She slowly looked back and saw something she has never seen before.
A dragon.
But she has got to admit. The dragon, although looked scary, was a rather beautiful creature. Bright crimson red scales all over its body, sharp horns and claws that were perfectly pearl white.
And sharp bright hazel eyes, like the ones she has.
"You know you are lying. You can never forget him Tenten, ah… I mean…Hinoko-sama"
"Who are you, a mind-reader? Geez, seriously, and who is this Hinoko-sama person?"
"Akahi Hinoko, that's you, eh… Tenten-chan"
"Oh god seriously! MY NAME IS TENTEN, THAT'S IT!" she grab her large scroll from the side of her couch and opened it up. "Leave or fight. Pick one! Or I will make you fight and die."
"I am not gonna fight, I will leave, soon. But that's only if you want me to. Trust me, you won't."
"Oh yeah? I really want you to leave! So leave!"
"Chill girl, don't you wanna know about your past?"
"My… Past?" Tenten had never thought about her past. All she knew was that she was an orphan, raised in an orphanage, when she enrolled in school, the hokage-sama then gave her a house to live in.
"You real name is Akahi Hinoko, borne in the Akahi clan, also known as the clan of fire. Like how the Aburame Clan uses bugs to fight, your clan uses dragon to fight. I belong to you the moment you were borned, Hinoko-sama"
"And then? What happened?" Tenten asked. It's right. She ended up not wanting it to leave. She wanted to know more.
"Konoha as well as the other lands decided that the Akahi clan was far too dangerous to exist. After several incidents of young Akahi members destroying villages and lands as they were not able to control dragons fully, the clan was closed down. Rather, destroyed. And you, like Uchiha Sasuke, was the only one who survived."
"So… Now what? What is it that you want? Why are you telling me all these?"
"The reason why Hyuuga Neji didn't love you, was because of your weakness. You are far too weak, Hinoko-sama, that's why, if you truly want him to love you, the only way, is to use my help. We can be stronger together, we will show everyone, that they made a wrong choice to destroy the Akahi clan, and destroy your life."
Tenten stoned. She want Neji's love. BADLY. But still, joining a dragon to revive a clan that was destroyed, she didn't like the idea at all, but still, for Neji…
"Alright, I will join you."
"Good, right now, Hinoko-sama, if you won't mind, I will transfer my powers to you, and-"
"and let me be stronger? Will it hurt? Let me tell you, I-" the dragon slowly entered her body. Tenten fell onto the ground. After a few seconds, her eyes opened. But they were no longer bright and big, instead, they are now sharp, and dangerous.
"Wrong, Hinoko-sama, I will transfer my power to you, and take over your body. Now, I can take my revenge."
In case you didn't get the story, this is what happened:
The dragon told tenten about her past, lured her into joining powers with it, and took over her body and mind, the beginning of its plan to 'take revenge'
Akahi(赤火): I made up tenten's surname. It's means crimson/burning fire
Hinoko(火野子): Tenten's real name. 火means fire,野 means wild,子 is just a common word used in girl's name.
Tenten's new real name that I made up: 赤火 火野子(Akahi Hinoko)
Please RandR! Nice comments are appreciated! Rude comments are deleted! ^_^
Next chapter should be out next week or so. After my dance performance at the Asean Game Opening. STRESS!
