Fifty Shades Destroyed
Hello fellow Fanfiction readers. I am not a fan of Fifty Shades. Never have and never will be. I am writing this story to highlight the sinister side of Christian Grey. He is not a dominant, he is a selfish, controlling, abusive bastard. I want to write a story about his need for control and how it causes him to lose everything. This is a trailer for the story. I hope you read it and let me know what you think.
I own nothing at all associated with Fifty Shades.
Song: 'Anne's Final Walk' by Trevor Morris
Shot of Ana sitting in her bedroom, alone, staring at a framed photograph of her wedding to Christian. She is crying.
Ana (Voiceover): 'I've tried to save him….'
Ana sniffs sadly, and wipes her cheeks as the tears continue to fall.
Ana (Voiceover): 'I've tried to be the one that could change him…'
As she continues to cry, Ana puts the photograph back on the dressing table. She looks down at her stomach.
Ana (Voiceover): 'But now, I need to be saved… from him.'
Ana lifts up her top, revealing at number of dark bruises lining her stomach.
Blackout.
Obsession.
A shot of Christian standing over a shaking Ana, his eyes dark with anger.
Control.
'You. Are. MINE, Anastasia!' shouts Christian. 'You will do well to remember that.'
Anger.
Shot of Ana tied up to the bed as Christian fucks her. She is in pain and tears are staining her face.
He had to have it all.
A shot of Ana crying as she picks up baby Teddy from his cot.
Until…
Kate (Voiceover): 'You're supposed to be his wife, not his punching bag.'
Ana (Voiceover): 'I just want to leave.'
A quick shot of Kate holding a sobbing Ana. Cuts to another scene where Christian is having dinner with Ana.
Christian: 'You know how I feel about you seeing Ms. Kavanagh, Anastasia.'
A shot of Kate and Elliott talking in their apartment.
Kate: 'I can't stand by and watch Ana get hurt anymore.'
Cuts to a scene where Christian and Kate are standing in the kitchen of the Greys' apartment.
Ana (Voiceover): 'I gave him my heart… and he threw it back in my face.'
Christian and Kate glare at each other, having a stare down.
A quick shot of Taylor and Elliott talking outside a hospital.
Ana is shown, packing her bags in her apartment.
Kate is then seen running through a field, hysterical.
Finally, a shot of Mia falling to her knees.
Mia: 'CHRISTIAN, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?'
Blackout.
Fifty Shades Destroyed
Christian (Voiceover): 'You'll never take away what's mine.'
And that marks the end of the trailer. Let me know what you think. If I get a good response, I will continue the story. Thanks!